Left panel wording changes

Made edits concerning a few different things -- ideally these would be comments, since the nature of these changes aren't all the same. Some are about readability; some are about making things more specific or more general; some are about making the content perhaps more understandable to someone naively walking into the Space; some are about UI presentation.

app.py

@@ -485,18 +485,19 @@ def load_cached_list():
 TITLE = "<div style='text-align: center;'><h1>🤗 Space Privacy Analyzer 🕵️</h1></div>\n<div style='text-align: center;'><h4>Automatic code Data transfer review powered by <a href='https://huggingface.co/Qwen/Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct' target='_blank'>Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct</a></h4></div>"
 
 DESCRIPTION = """
-### What Privacy Questions do 🤗 Spaces Raise?
+### Check the Privacy of a Hugging Face Space
 
-[Hugging Face Spaces](https://huggingface.co/spaces) offer a convenient way to build and share demos leveraging AI models.
-In most cases, the code for these demos is open source &mdash; which provides a unique opportunity to check **how they manage the privacy** of the data in use.
+[Hugging Face 🤗 Spaces](https://huggingface.co/spaces) offer a convenient way to build and share code demos online.
+In most cases, the code for these demos is open source &mdash; which provides a unique opportunity to **examine how privacy is managed** in the demo.
 
-This demo leverages a code analysis model ([Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct](https://huggingface.co/Qwen/Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct)) to help explore these questions in two steps:
-it first obtains and **parses the code** to identify data inputs, AI model use, API calls, and data transfer, then generates a summary of the app's function and **key privacy points**.
+This demo leverages a code analysis model ([Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct](https://huggingface.co/Qwen/Qwen2.5-Coder-32B-Instruct)) to help explore privacy questions in two steps:
+1. Obtain and **parse the code** of a Space to identify data inputs, AI model use, API calls, and data transfer behavior.
+2. Generate a summary of the Space's function and highlight **key privacy points**.
 
 Use the dropdown menu below to explore the [reports generated for some popular Spaces](https://huggingface.co/datasets/yjernite/spaces-privacy-reports/tree/main), or enter a new Space ID to query your own 👇
 
 *Please note the following limitations:*
-- *The model may easily miss important details in the code, especially when it leverages docker files or external libraries.*
+- *The model may miss important details in the code, especially when it leverages Docker files or external libraries.*
 - *This app uses the base Qwen Coder model without specific adaptation to the task. We'd love to discuss how to improve this, if you want to participate [feel free to open a discussion!](https://huggingface.co/spaces/yjernite/space-privacy/discussions)*
 """