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Now, offshore places could cause some danger for species as they migrate or change important habitat for feeding, breeding, and nursing. Info on accidental encounters and death rates is low, cause of the little number of places working in offshore areas. NOAA has started looking into longline sea gear that could be used by mussel and found that the encounters are rare. Yet, researches wonder if the little number of encounters seems to mean that this type of sea gear is harmless or it doesn't report all of its encounters with sea life. Belittling what happens on protected species may need more looking into and study the natural encounters between predator and prey. So, management plans might need to do more preventative measures, like as spatial planning on sea gear changes.
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Offshore facilities could affect some endangered species as they migrate or alter essential habitat for feeding, breeding, and nursing. Information on incidental entanglement and mortality is limited, because of the small number of facilities working in offshore areas. NOAA recently investigated longline aquaculture gear that might be used for mussel culture and found that interactions are rare. However, researchers questioned whether the small number of interactions indicates that this type of aquaculture is benign or is due to the failure to detect and report interactions. Minimizing impacts on protected species may require monitoring and research into natural interactions between predators and prey. Management strategies might involve preventive measures, such as spatial planning and aquaculture gear modifications.
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Dale, Here are the confirms for the Gas Daily option products that I need created. The product has no special requirements for setting the strike etc. if there are any questions please call me asap. I would like to have these products online by the October expiry which is next wWednesday. Please let me know when it will be possible Thanks
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Greetings Dale, Enclosed are the confirmations apropos the Gas Daily option products that need to be generated. The product contains no specific instructions for setting the strike et cetera. If there are any queries do not hesitate to contact me with intense haste. It would be most felicitous to get these products online by the October expiration, which is next Wednesday. Please inform me when it will come to fruition. Thank you
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The amount of folks that had a card went up from shy of 100,000 in FY1993 to 680,000 in FY2000. After auditors talked about how they’re worried that the government had issued too many credit cards and gave extreme credit limit factors that made card misuse even risker gave out a memo in April 2002 that made it where agencies had to take a look at the number of purchase cards they gave out and to think about deactivating all cards that hadn’t “proved themselves to be necessary.” That same year, necessities in the Bob Stump National Defense Authorization Act for FY2003 ( P.L. 107-314 ) said that the Department of Defense (DOD) had to make policies that limited both the number of purchase cards it gave out and the credit available to cardholders. These changes added on to a net decrease of 392,000 government purchase cards between FY2000 and FY2011.
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The number of cardholders grew from under 100,000 in FY1993 to 680,000 in FY2000. After auditors expressed concerns that the government had issued too many credit cards and provided excessive credit limitsâfactors that raised the risk of card misuseâOMB issued a memorandum in April 2002 that required agencies to examine the number of purchase cards they issued and to consider deactivating all cards that were not a "demonstrated necessity." That same year, provisions in the Bob Stump National Defense Authorization Act for FY2003 ( P.L. 107-314 ) required the Department of Defense (DOD) to establish policies limiting both the number of purchase cards it issued and the credit available to cardholders. These reforms contributed to a net decrease of 392,000 government purchase cards between FY2000 and FY2011.
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Here are the first mass measurements of lyman-@xmath0 galaxies moving away from us at high speeds. We looked at details from nine different galaxies from four different surveys and came up with velocity measurements. These measurements allow us to study lyman-@xmath0 galaxies on a super-galactic scale. The resulting masses fall between the @xmath1 to @xmath2 scales. We also compared our models to star population models and used them to compare our models to reality. In general, the lyman-@xmath0 galaxies follow the patterns we see when we look at other galaxies. In all of the different xmath cases we tried, the masses in our models generally agreed with what we see in reality. However, when we used the dynamic masses as an upper limit on gas mass, we saw that the lyman-@xmath0 galaxies actually look more like starbusts than normal galaxies in terms of their densities and star formations. Finally, we found that these galaxies will probably have to undergo "wet" merging at some point in their future. In short, we've found that lyman-@xmath0 galaxies are essentially just low mass cousins of bigger starbursts.
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We present the first dynamical mass measurements for lyman-@xmath0 galaxies at high redshift, based on velocity dispersion measurements from rest - frame optical emission lines and size measurements from hst imaging, for a sample of nine galaxies drawn from four surveys. These measurements enable us to study the nature of lyman-@xmath0 galaxies in the context of galaxy scaling relations. The resulting dynamical masses range from @xmath1 to @xmath2. We also fit stellar population models to our sample, and use them to plot the lyman-@xmath0 sample on a stellar mass vs. line width relation. Overall, the lyman-@xmath0 galaxies follow well the scaling relation established by observing star forming galaxies at lower redshift ( and without regard for lyman-@xmath0 emission ), though in @xmath3 of the lyman-@xmath0 galaxies, lower - mass fits are also acceptable. In all cases, the _ dynamical _ masses agree with established _ stellar _ mass - linewidth relation. Using the dynamical masses as an upper limit on gas mass, we show that lyman-@xmath0 galaxies resemble starbursts ( rather than `` normal'' galaxies ) in the relation between gas mass surface density and star formation activity, in spite of relatively modest star formation rates. Finally, we examine the mass densities of these galaxies, and show that their future evolution likely requires dissipational ( `` wet'' ) merging. In short, we find that lyman-@xmath0 galaxies are low mass cousins of larger starbursts. 17f_17 2s @xmath4 43l_43
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The most common problem is pneumonia, and the one after that is enterocolitis. Gangrene of the lungs, palate, pharynx, esophagus, anus or vulva may also cause conflict. Hemorrhaging of the facial artery or it's branch is an uncommon mode of death. This is because the arteries in the gangrenous becomes corked by thrombi, and stops hemorrhage.
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The complication most frequent is pneumonia, and the next entero-colitis. Gangrene of the lungs, of the palate, pharynx, or oesophagus, of the anus, and of the vulva, may supervene. Hemorrhage from the facial artery or its branches has been noted as an exceptional mode of death (Hueber), the rule being that the arteries in the gangrenous area become plugged by thrombi, and thus prevent hemorrhage.
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The New Markets Tax Credit, NMTC, was put into place by the Community Renewal Tax Relief Act of 2000, known as P.L. 106-554, to get investors to put money into low-income communities, LICs, that usually don't have any means to get resources. The NMTC is super competitive about giving tax credit awards and it's all under the Community Development Financial Institutions, CDFI, Fund, put together by the Department of the Treasury. Now, each time NMTC is given by Congress, the CDFI Fund puts in order all the requests for NMTC collected authority and gives awards to those CDEs that get the highest score. A CDE is a home based agency that is in between device for handing out loans, investments, or financial advising in LICs. All taxable investors, like banks, venture capital firms, and other private investors, are able to get the NMTC.
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The New Markets Tax Credit (NMTC) was enacted by the Community Renewal Tax Relief Act of 2000 ( P.L. 106-554 ) to encourage investors to invest in low-income communities (LICs) that traditionally lack access to capital. The NMTC is a competitively awarded tax credit overseen by the Community Development Financial Institutions (CDFI) Fund, organized within the Department of the Treasury. For each NMTC round authorized by Congress, the CDFI Fund ranks all requests for NMTC allocation authority and grants awards to those CDEs that score highest. A CDE is a domestic corporation or partnership that is an intermediary vehicle for the provision of loans, investments, or financial counseling in LICs. All taxable investors, such as banks, venture capital firms, and other private investors, are eligible to receive the NMTC.
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Dawn, Doesn't it suck to be at work and know that someone else is out of the country? I just want to let you know how much I suffered while you were gone. I realize now just how bad you must want out of this group. Without you or Jennifer there was no real conversation the whole week!! Chris just works quietly. Jason interrupts the quiet with inane comments that I have no idea how to respond to. And Anne...well I can't even explain that. Let me digress for just a moment to talk about work. Nothing really happened. All was quiet. If anyone was upset about anything they didn't tell me about it. I did get an email from Frank Cernseck(or how ever you spell his name). It seems we took too much as broker fees in July. I haven't researched it, but from what Victor tells me that's an adjustment that needs to be made on last day P&L. I'm sure I'm not telling you anything you don't know. Just wanted to let you know I'm glad you're here and I'm not. Hope you enjoyed your trip. Robin
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Dawn, do you find yourself in the doldrums due to being at work while someone else is traveling abroad? I would like to inform you as to the extent of my suffering while you were venturing. I recognize how severely you would like to participate in a different group. Due to you and Jennifer’s absences, the caliber of conversation this week was lacking. Chris works silently. Jason disturbs the silence with inane conversation that I am ill equipped to respond to. I am unable to comment on Anne. I would like to refocus my email on work. Nothing significant occurred while you were absent. All was quiet. If anyone was perturbed regarding any matter, they did not discuss it with me. I did receive an email from Frank Cernseck (I am unsure of how his name is correctly spelled). It appears that we received too much in the way of broker fees this July. I have not delved into research, thought Victor informs me that it is an adjustment that needs to be rendered on the final day P&L. I am certain that you are previously aware of all that I am mentioning. I wanted to inform you that I am grateful that you are here, and I am absent. I hope you had a wonderful vacation. Regards, Robin.
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Robert Corrigan (c. 1816 – 19 October 1855) came from Tyrone County. His folks came to Canada after 1831 and lived on lots in Saint-Sylvestre, Lower Canada, a mostly Roman Catholic place. He started farming and started believing in Anglicanism. This caused him to butt heads with a lot of people and caused, at least second handedly, to him dying from an awful battering. He was put in the ground on October 27th in Leeds, Lower Canada.
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Robert Corrigan, (c. 1816 – 19 October 1855) was born in County Tyrone. Corrigan's family immigrated to Canada sometime after 1831 and settled on lots in Saint-Sylvestre, Lower Canada a predominantly Roman Catholic area. He became a farmer there and converted to Anglicanism. This caused a great deal of strife and led, at least indirectly, to his death from a vicious beating. He was buried 27 October in Leeds, Lower Canada.
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So, the manor's first ever owner was Ansis Muiželis of Daugava's ferries and his son Albrecht Muiželis. And Albrecht's first wife was the Anna, sister to Johann Stienhauer. Later down the line, Albrecht's son, John Heinrich Muiželis, became owner of the manor. He was a merchant of Riga's 2nd guild and court judge of Conscience. Now, they had another kid named Karl Justus Davis Muiželis that a became a vet and taught the subject at Vilnius Uni. Near the end of the 18th century, John Heinrich settled up all of his affairs with his business and sold it. He did all this so he could buy the estate in the Vitebsk province and then move to Vilnus province. So, the manor gets inherited by his trade partner, an older brother of Albrecht Muiželis from the first merchant guild. When the Napoleonic Wars broke out, there were trades routes blocked and really hurt the Muiželis family business as France invaded Russia. The manor had to be sold to Albrecht Muižeļis' assistant for 3000 silver rubles after 1812. The mast selector John Mesters' daughter, Juilana Frederick due to her family history, got the court to invest in the Muiželis businesses. Juliana got hitched to a civil governor's secretary from the Governorate of Livonia, J. von Meyer. When Meyer passes away in 1841, the manor gets handed over to Riga's merchant A. M. Gorohova.
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The first known owner of the manor was Ansis Muiželis of Daugava's ferries and his son Albrecht Muiželis. Albrecht's first wife was Johann Steinhauer's sister Anna. Later the manor was owned by Albrecht's son - John Heinrich Muiželis, a merchant of Riga's second guild and court judge of Conscience. They also gave birth to Karl Justus Davis Muiželis, who became a professor of veterinary medicine at Vilnius University. In the late 18th century John Heinrich liquidated his company and purchased the estate in Vitebsk province, then moved to Vilnus province. The manor was inherited by his trade companion, an elder brother of Albrecht Muiželis from the first merchant guild. Napoleonic Wars caused blockades and the Muiželis family business suffered during the French invasion of Russia. After 1812, the manor was sold to Albrecht Muižeļis' assistant for 3000 silver rubles, the mast selector John Mesters' daughter - Juliana Frederick, because of her heritage the court invested into Muiželis' companies. Juliana was married to the civil governor's secretary from the Governorate of Livonia - J. von Meyer. After Meyer's death in 1841, the manor was passed to Riga's merchant A. M. Gorohova's property.
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"I guess Mrs. Belden made him suspect Berrie. He was already bitter, and when he found them eating together when he came up, he almost burst and barreled toward Wayland like an animal. Obviously he couldn't take on a big man like Cliff, and he hit his head on a rock. If Berrie hadn't choked the oaf he would've killed the poor boy right there in front of her.
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"I suppose Mrs. Belden filled him with distrust of Berrie. He was already jealous, and when he came up with them and found them lunching together, he lost his head and rushed at Wayland like a wild beast. Of course he couldn't stand against a big man like Cliff, and his head struck on a stone; and if Berrie hadn't throttled the brute he would have murdered the poor boy right there before her eyes."
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Dear Rick, Thanks for speaking with me today. Here is the position description for the KWI President of the Americas Opportunity. I feel that this is a tremendous opportunity to be an integral player with a very exciting relatively early stage Applications Software company, in the very exciting and hot Energy Commodities Sector; They are already profitable, pre-IPO. This position has a great compensation package. Please get back to me if you have an interest or if you know someone who might be intrigued by this opportunity. Thanks,
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Greetings Rick, Thanks for conversing with me today. Enclosed is the position described for the KEI President of the Americas Opportunity. I I feel that this is a tremendous opportunity to be an integral player with a very exciting relatively early stage Applications Software company, in the very exciting and hot Energy Commodities Sector; They are already profitable, pre-IPO. This position has a great compensation package. Please get back to me if you have an interest or if you know someone who might be intrigued by this opportunity. With my Appreciation
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Obviously, in any of these practices, there is a need to take heat away. Taking the heat away from an LED array while keeping fine optical coupling in a takeable system can be hard. In a camera structure where the doctor must hand-hold the camera, it wouldn't be comfortable to add the LEDs in the camera head because of the heat created by the LEDs and their related power electronics.
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Of course, in any of these applications, there is a need to remove heat. Removing the heat from an LED array while maintaining good optical coupling in a removable system can be a challenge. In a camera system where the surgeon has to hold the camera in their hand, it would be uncomfortable to include the LEDs in the camera head due to the heat generated by the LEDs and their associated power electronics.
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Back in 1995, North in her grass bikini got the feature in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Edition. She has taken off since then landing in advertisements for Alberta Ferretti, Versace, Saks Fifth Avenue, Givenchy, J.Crew, Valentino, Chanel, and Banana Republic. North has sashayed down the runways for heavy hitters like Christian Dior, DKNY, and Chanel. North has even gotten on the covers of Vogue, Elle, Marie Claire, and Harper's Bazaar. North was the feature for the 1999 Pirelli Calendar. DNA Model Management, FM Model Agency and Kim Dawson Agency all share in representing North. For Shiseido's 140th anniversary, they used North for the print model for the celebration.
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In 1995, North featured in the Sports Illustrated Swimsuit Edition in which she wore a grass bikini. Since then, she has been featured in advertisements for Alberta Ferretti, Versace, Saks Fifth Avenue, Givenchy, J.Crew, Valentino, Chanel, and Banana Republic. North has walked the runways for Christian Dior, DKNY, and Chanel. North has also graced the covers of Vogue, Elle, Marie Claire, and Harper's Bazaar. In 1999, North was featured in the Pirelli Calendar. North is currently represented by DNA Model Management, FM Model Agency and Kim Dawson Agency. In 2012, North was the print model to celebrate Shiseido's 140th anniversary.
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For our purposes, anytime we say "contract", we're referring to any agreement with the Federal Government to do work on public property that's worth more than $1,000,000. Similarly, whenever we say "contractor", we mean the person or group who is looking to do that sort of work for the Federal Government. Finally, the term "subcontractor" refers to anybody who's payed more than $100,000 by a contractor for their work on a public project.
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In this Act:(1) Contract.--The term ``contract'' means any contract with the Federal Government, exceeding $1,000,000 in amount, for the construction, alteration, or repair of any public building or public work of the United States.(2) Contractor.--The term ``contractor'' means an individual or entity that has been awarded or is seeking to be awarded a construction contract by the Federal Government.(3) Subcontractor.--The term ``subcontractor'' means an individual or entity that subcontracts with a contractor in an amount in excess of $100,000 for work on a contract.
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Trade press, recruiting firms and others recently have made numerous calls to Enron employees seeking information about the company, its employees and other matters. In some cases, these callers have used false identities, as in, "I'm from the SEC and I need you to provide me with?" If you receive a call from someone identifying themselves as part of a government organization, please refer the caller to the legal department. Please refer calls from the trade press and other media inquiries to the Public Relations group. And otherwise, please treat Enron information as confidential. Thank you.
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The trade press, certain recruiting agencies, and numerous other actors have been repeatedly contacting Enron employees seeking a variety of information about company matters. There have even been cases of these callers assuming false identities, e.g., "I am with the SEC and must insist that you provide me with x." If you should be contacted by anyone identifying themselves as a member of a government organization, it is imperative that you immediately direct them to Enron's legal department. Any attempts at communication from the trade press or other media groups similarly should be directed to Enron's Public Relations team. In all other cases, it is firmly requested that information about Enron be treated as strictly confidential. You have our gratitude.
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Late on October 25th, we received information about a nonspecific threat to the Enron Center. We communicated with law enforcement officials who found the threat unsubstantiated and without merit. Nonetheless we take all threats seriously and have increased the security presence at the Enron Center still further. Once again, if you observe suspicious behavior, please call security at 3-6200.
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Late on October 25th, we obtained data concerning a nonspecific threat to the Enron Center. We imparted our concerns with law enforcement officials who found the threat unsubstantiated and lacking any degree of merit. Nonetheless we prioritize all threats and have amplified the security presence at the Enron Center. Once again, if you observe suspicious behavior, please call security at 3-6200.
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We're looking at the possibility of probing large extra-dimensional models at the lhc through neutral triple gauge boson production processes. In theories with additional dimensions, these events happen coz of the exchange of a tower of huge graviton modes between the sm particles. We analyze the @xmath0, @xmath1, @xmath2 and @xmath3 production processes, and give our results for different kinematic distributions at the lhc for @xmath4 tev. Desy 11 - 229 + sfb / cpp-11 - 72 + lpn11 - 68 + m. c. kumar@xmath5 prakash mathews@xmath6 v. ravindran@xmath7 satyajit seth@xmath6 + @xmath8 deutsches elektronen - synchrotron desy, platanenallee 6, d-15738 zeuthen, germany + @xmath9 saha institute of nuclear physics, 1/af bidhan nagar, kolkata 700 064, india + @xmath10 regional centre for accelerator - based particle physics + harish - chandra research institute, chhatnag road, jhunsi, + allahabad 211 019, india pacs number: 12.38.bx, 13.85.qk, 14.70.hp, 14.80.rt.
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We study the prospects of probing large extra dimension model at the lhc through neutral triple gauge boson production processes. In theories with extra dimensions these processes result from the exchange of a tower of massive graviton modes between the sm particles. We consider @xmath0, @xmath1, @xmath2 and @xmath3 production processes, and present our results for various kinematic distributions at the lhc for @xmath4 tev. Desy 11 - 229 + sfb / cpp-11 - 72 + lpn11 - 68 + m. c. kumar@xmath5 prakash mathews@xmath6 v. ravindran@xmath7 satyajit seth@xmath6 + @xmath8 deutsches elektronen - synchrotron desy, platanenallee 6, d-15738 zeuthen, germany + @xmath9 saha institute of nuclear physics, 1/af bidhan nagar, kolkata 700 064, india + @xmath10 regional centre for accelerator - based particle physics + harish - chandra research institute, chhatnag road, jhunsi, + allahabad 211 019, india pacs number: 12.38.bx, 13.85.qk, 14.70.hp, 14.80.rt
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In Boy Scout parlance, when holding a knife the area within the radius of the arm and blade length combined is called the blood circle (or safety circle in contemporary use). This area can be envisioned as a hemisphere with a person and a sharp instrument at its centre. In one example, an area within the radius of the arm and the blade length of a knife combined is an area where the intended or unintended meeting of steel and flesh would cause blood to flow. It can also be seen that the backswing of an axe would cause considerable damage to a person unlucky enough to come in contact with the instrument during its journey through the arc of the swing.
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In Boy Scout terminology, when using a knife or axe, the area within the radius of the arm and blade length combined is called the blood circle or safety circle. This area can be envisioned as a circular plane with a person and a sharp instrument at its center. Presumably, anyone within this radius is at risk of being wounded by an accidental slip of the blade. Therefore, it is desirable to keep other people outside of the circle at all times. The circle is found by holding the blade of the cutting instrument (never the handle) in the hand used for cutting and slowly swinging the arm in a 360 & deg; arc. The far end of the handle demarks the limits of the circle. Any person or thing within this circle is considered to be at risk of injury. While it is never a good idea to enter another person's blood circle, it is customarily the responsibility of the knife-holder to clear the circle or to move if the circle cannot be cleared.
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For these works, which began in March 2005 and were scheduled to last until at least April 2006, one of the tunnels remains closed during off-peak hours (19:00 to 07:00 daily). This work, however has been beset with problems, the works were completed in 2010. Signs informing road users of the temporary tunnel bore closures have had the completion date blanked out. The roadworks are coinciding with the Hold Your Breath project aiming to add an artistic experience to travel through the tunnel. The pedestrian tunnel is also having its years of graffiti removed as part of its beautification project, however it is an ongoing problem, and often is replaced within weeks of being removed.
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Work began in March 2005 and was scheduled to last until at least April 2006, with one of the tunnels closed during off-peak hours (19:00 to 07:00 daily). However, problems that were encountered meant the work was only completed in 2010. The roadworks coincided with the "Hold Your Breath" project which aimed to add an artistic experience to travel through the tunnel. The pedestrian tunnel also had its years of graffiti removed as part of a beautification project, but it was often redone soon after being removed.
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This has created a problem among in these areas. Locals must take extra precaution in keeping their windows and doors tightly shut, for monkeys will get inside and raid their homes. Government officials claim they have lost important files due to monkeys getting into them. They have bitten people and threatened visiting foreign dignitaries. There have been several attempts to control the monkey population, including catching and attempting to relocate them, sterilize them, and placing ban against feeding them. Little has helped to control the population of these monkeys.
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This has forced locals to keep their windows and doors tightly shut lest monkeys raid their homes. Government officials claim to have lost important files to monkeys. The monkeys have bitten people and threatened visiting foreign dignitaries. Attempts to control the monkey population, including relocation, sterilization, and outlawing feeding them, have been ineffective.
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Mass fractions are typically around 0.8 to 0.9, with lower numbers corresponding to higher efficiency for the rocket overall. When applied to a stage, higher numbers indicate a more efficient design, since there is less non-propellant mass. A lower mass fraction for the rocket means that it uses fuel efficiently, reserving a larger portion of its mass as payload.
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Mass fractions are typically around 0.8 to 0.9. When applied to a rocket, as a whole, a low mass fraction is desirable since it indicates a greater capability for the rocket to deliver payload to orbit for a given amount of fuel. Conversely, when applied to a single stage, a higher mass fraction corresponds to a more efficient design since there is less non-propellant mass.
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}} The site was also specifically chosen because of the close proximity of a plentiful coal supply for the power station. Nearby were the Ellington and Lynemouth collieries. Ellington Colliery was sunk in 1909, and Lynemouth in 1927. The two collieries were eventually joined underground in 1968 by the Bewick Drift near Lynemouth.}} The power station was constructed near to the end of this conveyor belt.
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The site was also chosen because of the Ellington and Lynemouth collieries. Ellington Colliery sunk in 1909, with Lynemouth Colliery sinking 18 years later. However in 1968, the two collieries were connected underground by the Bewick Drift, from which coal was brought to the surface. The power station was constructed nearby the end of the conveyor belt.
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The Rocky Horror Picture Show is the 1975 film adaptation of the British rock musical stageplay, The Rocky Horror Show, written by Richard O'Brien. The film is a parody of / tribute to B-movie, science fiction and horror films of the late 1940s through early 1970s. Director Jim Sharman collaborated on the screenplay with O'Brien, who wrote both the book and lyrics for the stage. The film introduces Tim Curry and features Susan Sarandon and Barry Bostwick along with cast members from the original Kings Road production presented at the Royal Court Theatre, London, in 1973.
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The Rocky Horror Picture Show is a 1975 musical comedy horror film directed by Jim Sharman from a screenplay by Sharman and Richard O'Brien. It is based on The Rocky Horror Show, a musical stage play scripted and composed by O'Brien. The film is a humorous tribute to the science fiction and horror B movies of the late 1940s through early 1970s. It introduces Tim Curry and features Susan Sarandon and Barry Bostwick along with cast members from the original Kings Road production presented at the Royal Court Theatre, London, in 1973.
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Multimodality is considered particularly important given the importance of the visual mode in contemporary communication. Theorists such as Gunther Kress and Theo van Leeuwen are developing Halliday's notions by providing new "grammars" which identify the available resources for making meaning in other semiotic modes. In particular the visual and aural modes.
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Accounting for multimodality (communication in a range of semiotic modes-verbal, visual, and aural) is considered particularly important, given the importance of the visual mode in contemporary communication. Theorists such as Gunther Kress and Theo van Leeuwen have developed Halliday's notions by providing new "grammars" for other semiotic modes. These grammars are seen as socially formed and changable sets of available "resources" for making meaning. The visual and aural modes have received particular attention.
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On September 8, 2009 the RiverRats announced that Shawn Liotta would return to Erie as the head coach for the 2010 season. Hauser will maintain a smaller stake in the team, which immediately dropped the RiverRats name. The team will remain in the AIFA, and the team adopted the corporate name "Erie Professional Football, Inc." in December 2009, in anticipation of a new franchise name to be announced in January 2010.
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On September 8, 2009 the RiverRats announced that Liotta would return to Erie as the head coach for the 2010 season. The team remained in the AIFA, and the team adopted the corporate name "Erie Professional Football, Inc." in December 2009, in anticipation of a new franchise name to be announced in January 2010. Hauser maintained a smaller stake in the team, which immediately dropped the RiverRats name.
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It was released in the United States on August 21, 1981, and grossed $ 30.56 million at the box office. The film received positive reviews from critics, who praised Rick Baker's make-up special effects. The film won the 1981 Saturn Award for Best Horror Film and the inaugural Academy Award for Outstanding Achievement in Makeup.
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Released in the United States on August 21, 1981, it received positive reviews regarding Rick Baker's make-up special effects, and grossed $ 30.56 million at the box office. From Baker's effects, the film won the the 1981 Saturn Award for Best Horror Film and the inaugural Academy Award for Outstanding Achievement in Makeup.
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Dorothea Buck was born in April 1917, the fourth of five children in Naumburg an der Saale, where she also grew up. However, she found the "complete speechlessness" to be especially humiliating: the patients among each other had no speech and conversations between staff and patients were unusual. Due to the "Law for the Prevention of Diseased Offspring" Dorothea Buck was forcibly sterilized in the Von Bodelschwinghschen Anstalten in Bethel, Bielefeld, on 18 September 1936. After the war Dorothea Buck began to work as a sculptor.
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Dorothea Buck was born in April 1917, the fourth of five children in Naumburg an der Saale, where she grew up. In 1936, at the age of nineteen, she was diagnosed with schizophrenia at Von Bodelschwinghschen in Bethel. There she was exposed to permanent baths and cold water head pourings for "disciplining," then common practices of psychiatry in the first half of the 20th century. She found the "complete speechlessness" to be especially humiliating: patients did not speak to each other and conversations between staff and patients were unusual. According to the "Law for the Prevention of Diseased Offspring," Buck was forcibly sterilized in the Von Bodelschwinghschen Anstalten in Bethel on 18 September 18, 1936. After World war II, Buck began to work as a sculptor.
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Many harpsichords have exactly one string per note. There are several reasons why it is sometimes an advantage to have more. When there are two choirs of strings at the same length, it is possible to arrange for them to give different tonal qualities, and thus to increase the variety of sound produced by the instrument. This is done by having one set of strings plucked closer to the nut, which emphasizes the higher harmonics, and produces a "nasal" sound quality. When two strings tuned to the same pitch, or to an octave apart, are plucked simultaneously by a single keystroke, the note is louder and richer than one produced by a single string. The qualitative distinction is particularly noticeable when the strings are tuned an octave apart.
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While many harpsichords have exactly one string per note, more elaborate harpsichords can have more. This provides two advantages: the ability to vary volume and the ability to vary tonal quality. Volume is increased when the mechanism of the instrument is set up by the player (see below) so that the press of a single key plucks more than one string. Tonal quality can be varied in two ways. Second, having one key pluck two strings at once changes not just volume but also tonal quality; for instance, when two strings tuned to the same pitch are plucked simultaneously, the note is not just louder but also richer and more complex. A particularly vivid effect is obtained when the strings plucked simultaneously are an octave apart.
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Another characteristic of ISUP made possible by SS7 with NFAS is the exchange of signaling information during the middle of a call. Also possible with SS7 is Non-Call-Associated Signaling, which is signaling that is not directly related to the establishment of a telephone call. An example of this is the exchange of the registration information used between a mobile telephone and a home location register (HLR) database: a database that tracks the location of the mobile.
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Another ISUP characteristic made possible by SS7 with NFAS is the exchange of signaling information during the middle of a call. This includes the exchange of registration information used between a mobile telephone and a home location register database, which tracks the location of the mobile.
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Each team member is qualified in six different weapon types and highly-adept at CQC (Close Quarter Combat). The player's objective is to complete 30 missions of action, strategy, stealth, rescuing, escorting and various types of essential goals to stopping the terrorists. The player does not have unlimited pistol ammunition, like in Winback. Various weapons are found either on a character from the beginning or from arrested enemies in the form of a machinegun, sniper rifle, grenades, claymores and so on. Besides the graphical update and new cast of characters, the major feature newly implemented into this game from the original Winback is playing as two different characters per level.
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Each team member is qualified in six different weapon types and highly-adept at close quarters combat (CQC). The player's objective is to complete 30 missions of action, strategy, stealth, rescuing, escorting, and various types of essential goals to stop the terrorists. Besides a graphical update and new cast of characters, the major new feature in this game is playing as two different characters per level.
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A Vampyre Story was always intended to be a saga, and even before the game's release Autumn Moon Entertainment began working on a sequel. 'will continue the action right after the events of A Vampyre Story, which ended with a cliffhanger. Originally slated for a release in 2009 or 2010, the game encountered financial problems with its publisher and its development has been indefinitely stalled while Autumn Moon and Crimson Cow Games negotiate the terms of its resumption. In order to continue working within the license with the rights to the sequel lying with a publisher, Autumn Moon began working independently on an episodic prequel to A Vampyre Story called'. The series would depict Mona's first year held captive in Castle Warg, including her introduction to Froderick the bat.
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"A Vampyre Story" was intended as the opening chapter of a larger saga, and Autumn Moon Entertainment commenced production on the sequel prior to the game's release, described as "picking up directly after the events of A Vampyre Story, which ended with a cliffhanger." Originally slated for a release in 2009 or 2010--a much quicker turnaround than the first installment--the sequel's development has been indefinitely stalled due to budgetary contentions between Autumn Moon and the game's publisher, Crimson Cow Games. With the publishing rights to the sequel owned by Crimson Cow, Autumn Moon decided to work independently on an episodic prequel depicting Mona's first year of captivity in Castle Warg, including her introduction to Froderick the bat.
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Horton Bay is a beach located on the south of the Gower peninsula near Port Eynon Bay in Wales. It is accessible from the nearby village of Horton via a steep hill. The beach has a car park sited a few minutes away. Even with its accessibility, it is usually a very quiet beach but it is popular with surfers. Sand can be found on the beach even at high tide.
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Horton Beach is located in Port Eynon Bay on the south coast of the Gower peninsula in Wales. It is reached from the nearby village of Horton via a steep hill, and has a car park sited a few minutes' walk away. Despite its accessibility and its popularity with surfers, the beach is usually very quiet and it has sand even at high tide.
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As early as 1948, Melitta Schmideberg observed that emotionally deprived parents may unconsciously regard their children as parental figures'. "Spousification" and "parental child" (Minuchin) offered new routes to explore the same phenomenon, while the theme of 'intergenerational continuity of boundary violations' in parentification was also identified. For practical reasons, elder children are generally chosen for the familial "parental" role. Where there is a disabled child in the family to be cared for, 'older siblings, especially girls, are at the greatest risk of parentification'. It is a betrayal of the child's trust in her mother to love her and take care of her '.' A great drawback of parentification is the loss of one's own childhood 'Instead,' destructively parentified children assume excessive responsibility for other family members and often for the family as a whole. 'Parentified children may struggle with lingering resentment, explosive anger and difficulty in forming trusting relationships with peers'-traits that may end up 'following them into adulthood. Forming close, trusting romantic and spousal relationships may be difficult for adults who were parentified as children'. Not all results of parentification are negative.
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Melitta Schmideberg noted in 1948 how emotional deprivation could lead parents to treat their children (unconsciously) as substitute parent figures. "Spousification" and "parental child" (Minuchin) offered alternative concepts exploring the same phenomenon; while the theme of intergenerational continuity in such violations of personal boundaries was further examined. Alternatively a widower may put a daughter into the social and emotional role of his dead wife-"spousification"; or a mother can oblige her daughter to play the caring role, in a betrayal of the child's normal expectation of love and care. Narcissistic parentification occurs when a child is forced to take on the parent's idealised projection, something which encourages a compulsive perfectionism in the child at the expence of their natural development. In a kind of pseudo-identification, the child is induced by any and all means to take on the characteristics of the parental ego ideal-a pattern that has been detected in western culture since Homer's description of the character of Achilles. The almost inevitable byproduct of parentification is losing one's own childhood. In extreme instances, there may be what has been called a kind of disembodiment, a narcissistic wound that threatens one's basic self-identity. In later life, parentified children may be left struggling with unacknowledged anger and resentment, may have difficulty trusting their peers, and may end up struggling to form and maintain romantic relationships. However, not all results of parentification may be negative.
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Tantalum electolytic capacitors with solid electrolyte don't have wear-out failures so they don't have a life time specifiation in the sense like "wet" aluminum electrolytic capacitors. Aluminum electrolytic capacitors with non-solid electrolyte have an exceptional position within the area of electronic components because they are working with an electrolyte as liquid ingredient. The liquid electrolyte determines the time-dependent behavior of e-caps electrical parameter. They age over the time as the electrolyte evaporates.
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Tantalum electrolytic capacitors with solid electrolyte don't have wear-out failures so they don't have a life time specification in the sense like "wet" aluminum electrolytic capacitors. The life time of solid capacitors ends when a specified percentage of components, f. e. 1 & nbsp;%, have failed during their random failure rate time. In contrast with electrolytic capacitors with solid electrolytes the “wet” electrolytic capacitors will have an specified “end of life” point. The liquid electrolyte of non-solid aluminum electrolytic capacitors evaporates over the time. The capacitors age as the electrolyte is drying out.
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The Blueair Aware sends air quality data, updates and alerts in real time to a smartphone, when used with the Blueair Friend app. The Blueair Friend app monitoring outdoor and indoor air quality. It is a reliable wellness tool that informs you about the outdoor air quality, in real time, and recommends what measures you can take to stay healthy. Together with the Blueair Sense + air purifier and the Blueair Aware air quality monitor, it also puts you in total control of your indoor air quality. The Blueair Friend app allows you to automatically control functions, such as the airflow speed, LED light, child lock and night mode on your Sense + purifier, or to switch it on or off.
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The Blueair Aware sends air quality data, updates, and alerts to a smartphone when used with the Blueair Friend app. The Blueair Friend is an app monitoring outdoor and indoor air quality. It reads the outdoor air quality and recommends the user's measures to stay healthy in case of bad air quality. The Blueair Friend app also allows the user to control functions on the Sense + air purifier, such as the airflow speed, LED light, child lock, and night mode, or to switch it on or off remotely.
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Migrating Canada and Graylag Geese frequent the nearby fields on their way up from the Solway Firth / Caerlaverock or coming down from Spitzbergen in the winter. Duncan McNaught in 1895 records that he found a kingfisher's nest at an arms length inside an earthen burrow at Chapelton on the Annick. The river water quality is generally quite good nowadays, proven by the presence of freshwater limpets and shrimps, together with leeches, caddis fly larvae and water snail species.
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Migrating Canada and Graylag Geese frequent the nearby fields on their way up from the Solway Firth / Caerlaverock area or coming down from Spitzbergen in the winter. | The name 'Glazert' may come from the celtic, glas in Gaelic meaning grey or green and dur meaning water. The river's water quality is generally quite good nowadays, proven by the presence of freshwater limpets and shrimps, together with leeches, caddis fly larvae and water snail species. Pont in 1604-08 writes that salmon are plentiful in the River Irvine. The river system contains, amongst others, brown trout, sea trout, salmon, eels, minnows, lampreys, and sticklebacks.
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Zego is a London based insurtech start-up that offers flexible motor, personal and commercial insurance. The company sells policies-which range from an hour to a year-online, via phone and on its app. Founded by former Deliveroo employees Sten Staar and Harry Franks, as well as the former head of engineering at Hubble Stuart Kelly, the company began in the motor insurance space by offering hourly insurance for delivery drivers. The company has since branched out into other areas of insurance including public liability. In September 2018 it expanded internationally by launching in Ireland. Franks has stated that the inspiration came when looking into insurance for delivery drivers whilst at Deliveroo. Noticing that drivers who were working ten hours a week were paying the same rates as those who were working sixty hours, the costs for part-time drivers was too high. Without an existing product addressing the problem, he realised it would have to be built. And that was the click moment. My wife remembers the day, we were walking home. I said, ‘I’ve had this crazy idea, we can use data to make malleable insurance products.
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Zego is a London based insurtech start-up that provides flexible motor, personal and commercial insurance. The company sells policies ranging in length from an hour to a year. Customers purchase these online, via phone and through Zego’s app. Zego was founded by former Deliveroo employees Sten Saar and Harry Franks, alongside Stuart Kelly, former Head of Engineering at Hubble. The company originally began operating in the motor insurance market, selling policies by the hour to part-time delivery drivers. Since 2016, the company has expanded into other areas of insurance, including public liability insurance for self-employed professionals and employers’ liability cover for businesses. In September 2018, Zego launched overseas, making flexible motor insurance products available to delivery drivers in Ireland. In December 2018, Zego began offering motor insurance policies in Spain. Franks stated that his inspiration for Zego came when looking into insurance for delivery drivers whilst at Deliveroo.
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All of the original action figures came with minicomics that told stories involving the characters. In the earliest comics, He-Man is a wandering barbarian on Eternia, a world dealing with the aftermath of a Great War that has devastated the civilizations that once reigned, but has left behind fantastical machinery and weapons. The events of the Great War opened a rift between dimensions which allows the evil warlord Skeletor to travel to Eternia, and he has now set his sights on the ancient Castle Grayskull, the 'fortress of mystery and power'. Whoever attains control of Grayskull will gain the power to become Master of the Universe. Skeletor manages to find one half of the Power Sword, a great weapon which is itself the key to Castle Grayskull.
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The original action figures were packaged with minicomics that told stories about the characters. In the early comics, He-Man is a wandering barbarian on Eternia, a world dealing with the aftermath of a war which devastated its civilizations and left behind fantastic machinery and weapons. The war opened a rift between dimensions, allowing the evil warlord Skeletor to travel to Eternia. Skeletor has set his sights on the ancient Castle Grayskull, a fortress of mystery and power; whoever controls Grayskull will become Master of the Universe. To prevent Skeletor from achieving his goal, He-Man has received special powers and weapons from the Sorceress and defends the castle from Skeletor. Skeletor finds one half of the Power Sword, the key to Castle Grayskull. To distinguish these stories from the minicomics which were released as tie-ins with the TV series, fans called this first version of Eternia "mini-Eternia" and the words were combined into Mineternia in 2003 by the minicomics fansite Eternia Minor (now He-Man Tales).
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In 1975, the Malacca Public Library Corporation was enacted to establish the Malacca Public Library. The corporation was then established 2 years later in 1977 located at Hang Tuah Hall. In 1993, the Malacca Public Library Enactment (Amendment) Act 1993 went in force. The library was finally moved to its current location at Bukit Baru and inaugurated on 4 November 1996.
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In 1975, the Malacca Public Library Corporation Enactment was approved to establish the Malacca Public Library Corporation. The corporation was then established in 1977, with the enforcement of the Enactment which was amended in 1993. The main library was first located at Hang Tuah Hall before it moved to its current location at Bukit Baru and was inaugurated on November 4, 1996.
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: Light observation helicopter for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under licence in Japan. Based on the OH-6A Cayuse helicopter.: Light observation, scout helicopter for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under licence in Japan. Based on the Hughes Model 500D helicopter.
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: Light observation helicopter based on the OH-6A Cayuse for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under license in Japan.: Light observation, scout helicopter based on the Hughes Model 500D for the JGSDF. Built by Kawasaki Heavy Industries under license in Japan.
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Triplex Safety Glass was a famous British brand of laminated glass, often seen on automotive and aircraft windscreens. It makes toughened glass for automotive and aerospace markets. The Triplex Safety Glass Company Ltd was founded by Kent-born Reginald Delpech (30 March 1881-29 May 1935) in 1912.
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Triplex Safety Glass is a British brand of toughened glass and laminated glass. The marque is often seen on vehicle and aircraft windscreens. The Triplex Safety Glass Company Ltd was founded in 1912 by Kent-born Reginald Delpech (30 March 1881-29 May 1935).
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Graham supplied no fewer than four of the main characters' voices – Parker, Gordon Tracy, Brains, and Kyrano. Paul Maxwell (Fireball XL5), Charles "Bud" Tingwell and John Tate were not credited on-screen in either series, though Maxwell and Tingwell received credits in the first movies. The first film, Thunderbirds Are Go (1966), also featured two early voice-only appearances by popular entertainer Bob Monkhouse.
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Graham supplied no fewer than four of the main characters' voices – Gordon Tracy, Parker, International Rescue's resident scientist, Brains, and Tin-Tin's father, Kyrano. Maxwell (the voice of Zodiac in Fireball XL5), "Bud" Tingwell and Tate received no on-screen credit in either series, although Maxwell and Tingwell were credited for the films Thunderbirds Are Go (1966) and Thunderbird 6 (1968). Thunderbirds Are Go also featured two early voice contributions by entertainer Bob Monkhouse.
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Through Republic Act 797, Palawan Teachers College was transformed into Palawan State College on February 27, 1984, authorizing it to continue offering its existing collegiate courses and to add courses in arts, sciences, and technology. Finally, on November 12, 1994, PSC was renamed as the Palawan State University through Republic Act 7818, with the Board of Regents as its governing body. It has two major campuses, Manalo Campus, where Laboratory Elementary School, Graduate School and School of Law are located, and the Main Campus in Tiniguiban Heights, which houses Laboratory High School and all undergraduate courses, the administrative building, and other buildings. In addition, a number of extramural studies and programs are being conferred in Palawan's College of Community Resources and Development in rural campuses of Rizal, Narra, Araceli, Brooke's Point, Cuyo, Coron, Balabac, Rozas, and El Nido.
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Through Republic Act 797 on February 27, 1984, the Palawan Teachers College was transformed into the Palawan State College enabling it to continue offering its existing collegiate courses and to offer new courses in the arts, sciences, and technology. Finally, on November 12, 1994, PSC was renamed as the Palawan State University through Republic Act 7818, appointing a Board of Regents as its governing body. In addition, a number of extramural studies and programs are being offered in the Palawan State University's College of Community Resources and Development in rural campuses of Rizal, Narra, Araceli, Brooke's Point, Cuyo, Coron, Balabac, Rozas, and El Nido.
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At the College there are 6 houses per year, excluding the 6th Form (Year 12). Pupils then sit the NFER test. The test is designed to help teachers predict what kind of grades the pupils will achieve later in their career at the school. This process is commonly known at the school as "Banding", and does not solely rely on the NFER test but also from teacher recommendations. From the beginning of the next half term, pupils are placed into Houses.
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At the College there are 6 houses per year, excluding the Sixth Form (Year 12). Afterwards, pupils sit the NFER test, this along with teacher recommendations determines the corresponding set for the pupil. Also, from the beginning of the next half term, pupils are placed into Houses.
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A turn less than 360 ° is often called a pivot. Multiple, consecutive rotations are typically named according to the number of complete rotations, e.g. double turn or triple turn. Spotting technique is typically used during turns. Spotting is when the head is held stationary (not allowed to rotate) with the eyes focusing on a fixed point until the last possible moment, when it is whipped round. This gives the impression that the head is always facing forwards and presents a more dynamic looking turn. It also prevents dizziness by allowing the head to stay stable for longer. Typically, a single (360 °) turn begins facing forward, whereas 540 ° turns begin facing forward and end facing back, or start facing the left diagonal front and end facing the right diagonal front.
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A turn less than 360 ° is sometimes called a pivot. Multiple, consecutive turns are typically named according to the number of 360 ° rotations, e.g. double turn or triple turn. Spotting is a technique that is often used when executing turns, in which a performer executes a periodic, rapid rotation of the head that serves to fix the performer's gaze on a single spot, thus giving the impression that the head is always facing forward. Spotting prevents dizziness by allowing the head to remain stable during most of the turn. This helps the performer maintain balance and, when executing traveling turns such as tours chaînés and piques, it helps the performer control the direction of travel.
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| The two stage drainage ditch, with the introduction of the benches creates a larger area on a cross-sectional basis than a natural, trapezoidal channel. This has the effect of reducing flooding in adjacent upland areas and less saturated conditions, leading to better subsurface drainage performance and thus, growing conditions in the root zone. Further, less frequent flooding will reduce erosion and subsequent sedimentation as well as prevent excessive saturation of surrounding upland areas that can hamper soil quality. | The primary disadvantage associated with the two stage drainage ditch is the cost of the earthwork necessary to increase the existing channel / ditch width to allow for the benches to be constructed.
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The two-stage drainage ditch with the introduction of the benches creates a larger area on a cross-sectional basis than the existing, natural, trapezoidal channel. This is shown in the diagram below. Consequently, this has the effect of a reduced propensity to flooding in adjacent upland areas of the watershed and, thus, less soil saturation that hampers soil quality and erosion and subsequent sedimentation into the water channel. The primary disadvantage associated with the two-stage drainage ditch is the upfront cost of the earthwork necessary to increase the existing channel for the benches to be constructed.
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From that day on, he used the paintbrush whenever people needed help. When he saw that people had no water to use in the fields, he drew a river and the river came to life. People could bring water from the river to the field and save a lot of time and energy. When he saw it was difficult for people to till lands, he drew cows and water buffalos, both of which came to life. People could use the animals to till lands very easily. So when he saw the peoples' troubles, he would use his magic paintbrush to help. Then many people knew about the magic paintbrush, one of which was a powerful mandarin, who pays a visit to Ma Liang and invites him to his home.
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From that day on, Ma Liang used the paintbrush to help others with their needs or troubles. When he saw that people had no water to use in the fields, he drew a river which instantly becomes real where they can draw water from to take to the field and save a lot of time and energy. Ma Liang drew cows and water buffalos which came to life, and farmers used these animals to till lands easily. Many people knew about the magic paintbrush, one of which was a powerful mandarin, who pays a visit to Ma Liang and invites him to his home.
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Eobard Thawne is a fictional character portrayed by Tom Cavanagh and Matt Letscher in the television series of the Arrowverse, primarily The Flash and Legends of Tomorrow. The character is based on the DC Comics character of the same name and commonly known by the alter ego Reverse-Flash. Letscher portrays Thawne's original likeness, and Cavanagh after the character steals the identity and appearance of Harrison Wells. Cavanagh has been praised by critics and fans for his performance as Thawne.
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Eobard Thawne, otherwise known as the Reverse-Flash, is a fictional character appearing in various television series set within the CW’s Arrowverse, most notably The Flash and Legends of Tomorrow. Portrayed by actors Tom Cavanagh and Matt Letscher, the character is based on the DC Comics villain of the same name. Letscher portrays Thawne's original likeness, while Cavanagh plays the character after he steals the identity and appearance of Harrison Wells. Cavanagh’s performance as Eobard Thawne has been praised by critics and fans.
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Immediately after the passing of the stranger, candles would not stay lit in the room where his corpse was. In subsequent days, many annoyances were experienced around the Livingston house, including the sounds of horses galloping, crockery breaking for no apparent reason, and burning embers jumping from the fireplace hearth. Subsequently, these annoyances were replaced by the sounds of heavy shears making a clipping noise in various parts of the house. Along with the clipping sounds, all sorts of materials-fabric, sheets, and boots were clipped with half-moon shapes and other figures. These manifestations continued over a period years, causing great distress to the Livingston family.
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After the stranger died, it is said that candles would not stay lit in the room where his corpse was, sounds of horses galloping and crockery breaking were heard, and burning embers jumped from the fireplace hearth. Supposedly, sounds of heavy shears making clipping noises were heard in various parts of the house, and all sorts of materials-fabric, sheets, and boots were clipped with half-moon shapes and other figures. According to the legend, the manifestations continued over a period years, causing great distress to the Livingston family.
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This protein was shown to be a dendritic cell survival factor and is involved in the regulation of T cell-dependent immune response. T cell activation was reported to induce expression of this gene and lead to an increase of osteoclastogenesis and bone loss. This protein was shown to activate antiapoptotic kinase AKT / PKB through a signaling complex involving SRC kinase and tumor necrosis factor receptor-associated factor 6 (TRAF6), which indicated this protein may have a role in the regulation of cell apoptosis. A further role for RANKL in immunity was uncovered for sinusoidal macrophages of the lymph node that function to alert the immune system to lymph-borne antigens. In addition to a direct RANK signaling for macrophage differentiation, RANKL activates the adjacent lymphatic endothelial cells to create a niche environment for these specialized immune cells.
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It is a dendritic cell survival factor and helps regulate T-cell-dependent immune responses. T cell activation induces RANKL expression and can lead to an increase in osteoclastogenesis and bone loss. A further role for RANKL in immunity was found in sinusoidal macrophages in lymph nodes that alert the immune system to lymph-borne antigens. In addition to directly signaling through RANK for macrophage differentiation, RANKL activates the adjacent lymphatic endothelial cells to create a niche environment for these specialized immune cells.
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Ceanothus tomentosus is a species of shrub in the buckthorn family Rhamnaceae known by the common name woollyleaf ceanothus. It is native to several of the mountain ranges in California and Baja California, including the Sierra Nevada and the Peninsular Ranges. It grows in dry, shrubby habitat such as chaparral. This is an erect shrub approaching three meters in maximum height.
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Ceanothus tomentosus, with the common name Woollyleaf ceanothus, is a species of shrub in the buckthorn family Rhamnaceae. It is native to several of the mountain ranges in California and Baja California. Ceanothus tomentosus grows in dry, shrubby habitat such as chaparral. The habitat includes the Sierra Nevada and the Southern California Peninsular Ranges. Ceanothus tomentosus is an erect shrub approaching three meters in maximum height.
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The band weaves three-part vocal harmonies into energetic rock and roll jams one moment, and drops into captivating, atmospheric Americana ballads the next. With members hailing from Vermont, Colorado, Alaska, and Connecticut, each cutting their teeth in the music scene throughout the mid-nineties, THUNK is inspired by artists like Ryan Adams, Wilco, Phish, Neil Young, Son Volt, and many more. If you enjoy Americana Rock n 'Roll, micro-brews, mountains and sunshine, you'll find THUNK to be the perfect compliment.
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The band uses three-part vocal harmonies to accentuate high energy rock and roll jams, but also delve into atmospheric, down-tempo Americana ballads. With members hailing from Vermont, Colorado, Alaska, and Connecticut, each cutting their teeth in the music scene throughout the mid-nineties, THUNK is inspired by artists like Ryan Adams, Wilco, Phish, Neil Young, Son Volt, and My Morning Jacket.
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White was born on May 2, 1943, in Thief River Falls, Minnesota, and moved to Vermont in 1972. She received her bachelor's degree from the University of Iowa, Iowa City, Iowa, in political science and sociology in 1965 and her master's degree in Community Development and Community Education in 1972 from Southern Illinois University, Carbondale, Illinois. White lives in Putney, Vermont. She is married to Bill White and they have two grown children, Laurie and Josh.
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White was born on May 2, 1943, in Thief River Falls, Minnesota. White moved to Vermont in 1972. She currently lives in Putney, Vermont with her husband, Bill White. She received a bachelor's degree in 1965 from the University of Iowa in Iowa City in political science and sociology. She earned a master's degree in 1972 from Southern Illinois University, Carbondale, in Community Development and Community Education. She and Bill White have two grown children, Laurie and Josh.
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Pottermore, a website with information and stories about characters in the Harry Potter universe, launched in 2011. On its release, Pottermore was rooted in the Harry Potter novels, tracing the series's story in an interactive format. Its brand was associated with Rowling: she introduced the site in a video as a shared media environment to which she and Harry Potter fans would contribute. The site was substantially revised in 2015 to resemble an encyclopedia of Harry Potter. Beyond encyclopedia content, the post-2015 Pottermore included promotions for Warner Bros. films including Fantastic Beasts. Harry Potter and the Cursed Child premiered in the West End in May 2016 and on Broadway in July. At its London premiere, Rowling confirmed that she would not write any more Harry Potter books.
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Rowling introduced the Pottermore website in a video as a shared media environment to which she and Harry Potter fans would contribute in 2011. Rooted in the Harry Potter novels, tracing the series' story in an interactive format, the site was substantially revised in 2015 as an encyclopedia of Harry Potter and included promotions for Warner Bros. films, including "Fantastic Beasts." At the London premiere of "Harry Potter and the Cursed Child" in May 2016, Rowling confirmed that she would not write any more Harry Potter books.
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Another important application type is text editor. It occupies the whole area of display, shows a text document, and allows the user to edit the document. This has in part been replaced by word processors. The first word processors used text to communicate the structure of the document, but later work outside of the text terminal and simulate the final paper document in a graphical user interface.
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Another important application type is that of the text editor. A text editor occupies the full area of display, displays one or more text documents, and allows the user to edit the document. This has in part been replaced by word processors, which often provide rich formatting features that text editors lack. The first word processors used text to communicate the structure of the document, but later word processors operate in a graphical environment and provide a WYSIWYG simulation of the formatted output.
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The first edition of her poems, "Apple Blossoms," was published in Milwaukee, by Strickland, in 1874; the second edition by Jansen, McClnrg & Co., Chicago, in 1877. Griswold continued a regular contributor to the New Covenant after John Wesley Hanson took control, in 1869, until it united with The Star in the West, continuing to communicate with the public through its pages in prose and verse. Her other books included "Home Life of Great Authors" (Chicago, 1877), "Waiting on Destiny" (Boston, 1889), and "Lucille and Her Friends" (Chicago, 1890). In 1878, Griswold collected many of her poems and published them, including those that had not been previously published, in a volume entitled Apple Blossoms.
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Griswold continued to be a regular contributor to the New Covenant after John Wesley Hanson took control, in 1869, until it united with The Star in the West, continuing to communicate with the public through its pages in prose and verse. The first edition of her poems, "Apple Blossoms", was published in Milwaukee, by Strickland, in 1874; the second edition by Jansen, McClurg & Co., Chicago, in 1877. Some of these poems had been published previously, and others had not.
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For several years, and in conjunction with the Kaleidoscope dance Theatre, the three and other guests taught classes in sessions called the Winter and Summer Dance Intensives until 1999 when the full name of the New York Dance Festival was embraced. The Festival had grown in notoriety and size for providing an ever-increasing roster of world-renowned faculty, and artistic disciplines, for one of the only non-audition festival of it's caliber who offer "no-training to Professional level dance" in the USA. The New York Dance Festival attracts performers, teachers, and distinguished guests from around the world. With critically acclaimed concerts, world-class dance classes, guest lecturers, and a Gala Event, the two-week Festival has created a world stage for dance, drumming, and music in the Finger Lakes. The New York Dance Festival includes the New York Summer Dance Intensive, the New York Drum Festival, the New York Musical Theater Project, the Carmen De Lavallade Awards for Dance, Fellowships, Residencies, and a World Class Concert Series. To take one's place as a statewide region of merit, the Finger Lakes Region will need to boast a Cultural Arts scene that is second to none. The concept of true multicultural diversity in the arts has challenged regional establishments for many years. Having a nationally recognized dance event is a crucial part of any city’s or region's tourism and economic campaign.
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For several years, and in conjunction with the Kaleidoscope Dance Theatre, these three and other guests taught classes in sessions called the Winter and Summer Dance Intensives until 1999 when the full name of the New York Dance Festival was embraced. The Festival had grown in notoriety and size for providing an ever-increasing roster of world-class faculty, and artistic disciplines, for one of the only Non-Audition Festival of it's caliber who offer "no-training to world-class professional level dance" in the USA. The concept of true multicultural diversity in the arts has challenged national establishments for many years. Having a recognized multicultural event is a crucial part of any city’s or region's tourism and economic campaign.
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He was a competitive young man from his childhood itself, being the eldest son of a prominent businessman Prem Fernando; He was able to grow up close to the business world where he is very successful in now. Ranushka was a very bright student at his studies; He attended Maris Stella College Negombo and Colombo International School. Soon after he finished his education he started to work with Video Editing side, today he is a well-renowned VFX Editor and Video Director. His name is synonymous among the Sri Lankan music industry and film industry. His 1st official music video was “” and His 1st movie that he did VFX Editing was “Parapura” – Sinhala Movie.
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He was a competitive young man from his childhood itself, being the eldest son of a prominent businessman Prem Fernando; Growing up close to the business world has contributed to his current business where he is very successful in now. Ranushka was a bright student at his studies; He attended Maris Stella College Negombo and Colombo International School. Soon after he finished his education he started to work with Video editing and Special effect, today he is a well-renowned VFX Editor and Video Director.
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A Doctor's Report on Dianetics: Theory and Therapy gives credit to the concepts of Dianetics which the author adheres to, and also cites the particular issues that Winter disagrees with. Winter agreed with L. Ron Hubbard's concept of the engram, writing that engrams can be formed in the prenatal stage, but he disagreed with Hubbard's concept of the "sperm dream", asserting that this was something purely imagined by the patient. According to Winter, repeated attempts to try to convince Hubbard to utilize a minimum standard upon which to test student applicants was not successful. Though Hubbard claimed that a Clear had been obtained after twenty-four hours of therapy, Winter never observed an individual reach the state of Clear or display any of the unique abilities attributed to a Clear by Hubbard during his time practicing Dianetics. Winter also took time in his book to rebuke Hubbard's "Guk" program, which was a combination of vitamins and glutamic acid that was meant to make dianetics subjects "run better".
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A Doctor's Report on Dianetics gives credit to certain concepts of Dianetics and also cites the particular areas that Winter disagrees with. Winter agreed with Hubbard's concept of the engram, writing that engrams can be formed in the prenatal stage, but he disagreed with Hubbard's concept of the "sperm dream", asserting that this was something purely imagined by the patient. Winter also objected to patients recalling deaths from previous reincarnations, Hubbard's authoritarian attitude and disregard for usage of the scientific method, and Hubbard's view that anyone could become an auditor. Winter also rebuked Hubbard's "Guk" program, which was a combination of vitamins and glutamic acid that was meant to make Dianetics subjects "run better".
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He was drafted by the Texas Rangers in the 38th round of the 2013 Major League Baseball draft, but he did not sign and played college baseball at the University of Oklahoma. As a junior at Oklahoma in 2016, Neuse hit .369 / .465 / .646 with 10 home runs and 48 runs batted in and was the winner of the Brooks Wallace Award. Neuse was drafted by the Washington Nationals in the second round of the 2016 MLB Draft.
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The Texas Rangers selected him in the 38th round of the 2013 Major League Baseball (MLB) draft, but he did not sign. Neuse enrolled at the University of Oklahoma, where he played college baseball for the Oklahoma Sooners. As a junior at Oklahoma in 2016, Neuse hit .369 / .465 / .646 with 10 home runs and 48 runs batted in (RBIs). He won the Brooks Wallace Award, given annually to the best shortstop in college baseball. The Washington Nationals selected Neuse in the second round of the 2016 MLB draft.
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Destiny Loretta Evans (born October 1993) is a fictional character on the ABC soap opera One Life to Live. The role was portrayed by Shenell Edmonds. Edmonds was put on contract in May 2010 with her first contract episodes airing the week of June 7. Edmonds remained on the show through the series finale on January 13, 2012.
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Destiny Loretta Evans is a fictional character on the ABC soap opera One Life to Live. The role was portrayed by actres Shenell Edmonds. Edmonds was bumped up from recurring to a contract lead role in May 2010, with her first contract episodes airing the week of June 7, 2012; she remained with the serial through its finale episode first-run January 13, 2012. The character's birth date is placed in October 1993.
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Hennessey owns the division Hennessey Special Vehicles, in which they build the Hennessey Venom sports cars. The division is tasked to learn from their experiences with their Venom sports cars and apply it to its newest variation, in which it will succeed the previous one. All vehicles sold under Hennessey Special Vehicles are branded as a regular Hennessey model, but are built under the division. The Hennessey Venom F5 is the first vehicle to be produced by Hennessey Special Vehicles. The car will be the successor to the Hennessey Venom GT and continue the legacy as the World's Fastest Production Car. The Venom GT was built under Hennessey Performance Engineering, but was recently placed under the Hennessey Special Vehicles division. Even with this merger, however, the GT does not belong as a Hennessey Special Vehicles product, as it was produced by Hennessey Performance Engineering.
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Hennessey owns the recently-established Hennessey Special Vehicles division, in which it builds the Hennessey Venom sports car line-up. The division is tasked to learn from its experiences with the Venom sports car and apply it to its newest variation, the Hennessey Venom F5, which will succeed the Venom GT. All vehicles sold under the division are branded as a regular Hennessey model, despite being built by the division. The Venom F5 is the first vehicle to be produced by the recently-established division. The car will be the successor to the Venom GT and continue the legacy as World's Fastest Production Car.
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Frightened, he is unable to react quick to avoid the gut punch and crumbles before the Insect. Busuzima exclaims that she can't do that, shocked that his plans have to come to naught, though remembers that the nine-tailed fox is still there, and decides to use her instead. Mana panics and runs away as Busuzima chases after her. Though, not for long, as he runs away himself with Mana in fox form attached to his rear.
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In his fright, he is unable to react quickly enough to avoid a gut punch, and crumples before the Insect. Mana muses over the completion of the seal as Busuzima laughs, telling her that it is all over for Ryoho, and that now he will be taken away and experimented on. Then he pauses, and yells in horror, realising what the girl has said about resealing means that Ryoho cannot change back into a dragon. Busuzima exclaims that she can't do that, shocked that his plans have to come to naught. However, he remembers that the nine-tailed fox is still there, and decides to use her instead. Mana panics and runs away as Busuzima chases after her; but not for long, as he then runs away himself, with Mana, in fox form, attached to his rear.
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Ten songs competed in the contest. A 9-person jury selected the top 5 songs, with televoting selecting the final winner. The winner of Dansk Melodi Grand Prix 1993 was the Tommy Seebach Band with the song "Under stjernerne på himlen" (Under the stars in the sky), composed by Tommy Seebach and host Keld Heick. Tommy Seebach participated in the Danish national selection for the 7th time, winning it in 1979 (coming 6th in the ESC) and in 1981 together with Debbie Cameron (coming 11th in the ESC). He came 2nd in 1982 and 1985 and 4th in 1984 and 1987. "Esmer Yarim" was performed in 5th position on the night of the contest, following Switzerland's "Moi Tout Simplement" and preceding Greece's "Ellada, Chora Tou Fotos". "Under Stjernerne På Himlen" came 22nd in the contest with 9 points.
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Ten songs competed in the contest with two rounds of voting selecting the winner: a 9-person jury selected the top 5 songs which progressed forward to a public televoting which selected the final winner. The winner of Dansk Melodi Grand Prix 1993 was the Tommy Seebach Band with the song "Under stjernerne på himlen", composed by Tommy Seebach and host Keld Heick. This was Seebach's seventh appearance at Dansk Melodi Grand Prix, having previously won twice (in 1979 and 1981 (with Debbie Cameron)) as well as placing 2nd in 1982, 4th in 1984, 2nd in 1985 and 4th in 1987. Seebach performed 5th at the Eurovision Song Contest 1993 in Millstreet, Ireland, following Switzerland and preceding Greece. "Under stjernerne på himlen" placed 22nd of the 25 competing countries, receiving a total of 9 points, receiving 1 point from Sweden, 3 points from Luxembourg and 5 points from Bosnia and Herzegovina. This relegated Denmark from competing in the Eurovision Song Contest 1994, after placing in the bottom 6 entries.
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The Kings finished 3rd of the 9 teams competing in the National League. This was enough for a play-off place and in the home 1st leg of the semi-final against Coventry Storm the Kings ran out 49-44 winners. Disappointment was to follow in the away leg where the Kings were beaten 54-39 with Coventry progressing to the final against Cradley. Disappointment also in the National Trophy where the Kings finished last of the 4 teams competing. Also in the National League Fours with Lambert, Morley, Ayres and Baseby giving their all in a tough group falling agonisingly short in a last heat decider in the Semi-Final group.
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The Kings finished third of the nine teams competing in the National League. This was enough for a play-off place, and in the home first leg of the semi-final against Coventry Storm, the Kings ran out 49-44 winners. In the away leg, the Kings were beaten 54-39, with Coventry progressing to the final against Cradley. In the National Trophy, the Kings finished last of the four teams competing. Lambert and Morley finished third in the National League Pairs, and Morley finished third in the National League Riders Championships. In the National League Fours, Lambert, Morley, Ayres and Baseby fell agonisingly short in a last heat decider in the Semi-Final group. For the 2020 British speedway league season Kent Kings entered the SGB Championship, but the promotion also continued to run a team in the National Development League.
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During the credits of "Bart Has Two Mommies" she is seen in heaven with Bob Hope and God wondering how her boys are doing. Her ghost also appears in the opening sequence for "Treehouse of Horror XIII". Maude appeared as a primary character in a flashback in season 20's episode, Dangerous Curves. Maude was also seen in the season 20 episode "Take My Life, Please" as a high school student asking if Homer had a date to the dance.
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Her ghost appears in the opening sequence for "Treehouse of Horror XIII," and during the credits of "Bart Has Two Mommies," she is seen in heaven with Bob Hope and God, wondering how her boys are doing. Maude appeared as a primary character through flashback in season 20's "Dangerous Curves." She was also seen in the season 20 episode "Take My Life, Please" as a high school student asking if Homer had a date to the dance.
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Albert III died at 35,000 feet (10.7 & nbsp; km) in an explosion of his V2 on September 16, 1949. Albert IV, on the last monkey V-2 flight, died on impact on December 8 that year after another parachute failure. His flight reached 130.6 & nbsp; km.
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On September 16, 1949, Albert III died below the Kármán line, at 35,000 feet (10.7 & nbsp; km), in an explosion of his V2. On December 8, Albert IV, the second mammal in space, flew on the last monkey V-2 flight and died on impact after another parachute failure after reaching 130.6 & nbsp; km.
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However, he hasn't received any Award even after receiving 6 nominations. Also, no Director has ever won if one has been nominated twice in the same year – Gulzar in 1974, Basu Chatterjee in 1977 and Hrishikesh Mukherjee in 1980. Sai Paranjpye was the first of four women to have won this award, the second being Zoya Akhtar, the third being Ashwiny Iyer Tiwari, and the fourth being Meghna Gulzar.
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However, he hasn't received any award even after having being nominated 6 times. Sai Paranjpye was the first of 4 women to have won this award, the second being Zoya Akhtar, the third being Ashwiny Iyer Tiwari, and the fourth being Meghna Gulzar.
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The following table shows some of the main flowers and accents used to create a custom-made corsage and can be included in a nosegay and boutonnière. For each event, a corsage may vary on the type of style and design that will be used when creating. Looking at a more modern point of view the younger generation will be using wrist corsages, and depending on the person the style and size does differ. The other option that was the original style would be the pin on corsage.
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The following table shows some of the main flowers and accents used to create a custom-made corsage and that can be included in a nosegay and boutonnière. A corsage's style and design may vary depending on the event. The younger generation tends to use wrist corsages, which themselves may vary in style and size depending on the wearer. The more traditional option is the pin on corsage.
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In an official 143 page statement of the grounds for the acquittals, the judges were swayed by a court ordered independent expert review that discredited DNA evidence key to the prosecution case. The failure of Knox and Sollecito to provide precise accounts of there activities was a very differnt things to giving a false alibi. The witness testimony of a homeless heroin addict that he had seen Knox and Sollecito out on the night of the murder, contradicting their alibi of spending the whole night together at Sollecito's apartment, was also not credible in the judges opinion.
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In an official 143 page statement, the grounds for the acquittals included a court ordered independent expert review that had discredited DNA evidence key to the prosecution case. Failure to provide accounts of activities that exactly matched was a very differnt thing to giving a false alibi according to the judges, and they discounted the testimony of a homeless heroin addict that he had seen Knox and Sollecito out on the night of the murder.
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In South Korea (Republic of Korea) the fiscal year starts on 1 January and ends 31 December. In Spain the fiscal year starts on 1 January and ends 31 December. The fiscal year for individuals runs from 1 January to 31 December.
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In South Korea, the fiscal year is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December. In Spain, the fiscal year is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December. In Sweden, the fiscal year for individuals is the calendar year, 1 January to 31 December.
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A typical performance takes approximately 80 minutes, much longer than his early works or most music written by his peers in the avant-garde. However, it is only mid-length by the standard of his late works. For the entirety of the piece, the musicians follow a simple alternating pattern: the string quartet plays a sustained chord, then the pianist plays an arpeggiated or "broken" chord.
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A typical performance takes approximately 80–90 minutes, which is much longer than most music written by his peers in the avant-garde or even Feldman's own early works. However, it is only moderate length by the standard of his late works. Although scored for the same instrumentation as a piano quintet, the piece—as its title suggests—sets the piano and string quartet apart as two detached entities. For the entirety of the piece, the musicians follow a simple pattern: the string quartet plays a sustained chord, and the pianist plays an arpeggiated or "broken" chord.
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Henson apparently failed to notice a bug in Seggelmann's implementation, and introduced the resulting vulnerability, Heartbleed, into OpenSSL's source code repository on December 31, 2011. Heartbeat support was enabled by default, causing affected versions to be affected by default. The vulnerable code has been adopted to widespread use with the release of OpenSSL version 1.0.1 on March 14, 2012.
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Henson apparently failed to notice a bug in Seggelmann's implementation, and introduced the flawed code into OpenSSL's source code repository on December 31, 2011. The vulnerable code was adopted into widespread use with the release of OpenSSL version 1.0.1 on March 14, 2012. Heartbeat support, with the vulnerability that came to be know as Heartbleed, was enabled by default.
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Significantly, he is the grandson of the First Spinjitzu Master, who was the legendary inventor of the show's fictional martial art of Spinjitzu and the creator of the realm of Ninjago. He is also the son of Garmadon, the elder son of the First Spinjitzu Master, and Misako, an archaeologist. The series relates the history of how his father was consumed by darkness and cast into another realm called the Underworld by Lloyd’s uncle, Wu. As a result, Lloyd spent his childhood without knowing his father. Misako sent Lloyd to Darkley’s School for Bad Boys, where Lloyd hoped to follow in the footsteps of his villainous father. However, he was expelled for not having the amoral character required to become an evil mastermind. The prophecy of the Green Ninja is revealed in Season 1 and foretells that the Green Ninja will rise above the others and save Ninjago from a dark lord. Eventually, events in the plot reveal that Lloyd is the chosen one, which places his character on the opposing side to his father, Lord Garmadon and confirms that his destiny is to save Ninjago from evil. Lloyd makes his debut in the first season of Ninjago as a mischievous child wanting to be an evil warlord like his father, Lord Garmadon. To prove himself, he attempts to release five Serpentine tribes to conquer Ninjago, but is instead taken prisoner due to his immaturity. He is eventually taken into the care of Master Wu and turned from the path of evil. It is later revealed that destiny has chosen Lloyd to be the prophesied Green Ninja, which means that he must defeat his father to save Ninjago. In the second season, the Ninja train Lloyd to develop his fighting skills and learn the martial art of Spinjitzu.
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Significantly, he is positioned as the grandson of the First Spinjitzu Master, who is described as the legendary inventor of the show's fictional martial art of "Spinjitzu" and the creator of the fictional realm of Ninjago. He is also the son of Lord Garmadon, the elder son of the First Spinjitzu Master, and Misako, an archaeologist. The series incorporated a fictional backstory relating to how Lloyd's father was consumed by darkness and cast into another realm called the Underworld by Lloyd’s uncle, Wu. These events have been shown to have had a major impact on Lloyd's character, who was presented growing up without knowing his father but desiring to follow in his footsteps. In the first season, the prophecy of the Green Ninja was revealed, who according to the lore of the show, is destined to rise above the others and save Ninjago from a dark lord. Lloyd made his debut in the first season of Ninjago as a mischievous child wanting to be an evil warlord like his father. The story portrayed him attempting to prove himself by conquering Ninjago, but failing due to his immaturity. The plot related how he is eventually taken into the care of Master Wu and turned from the path of evil. It was later revealed that Lloyd would become the prophesied Green Ninja, which consequently resulted in an inevitable confrontation with his father. In the second season, the story centered on the Ninja training Lloyd to develop his fighting skills and learn the fictional martial art of Spinjitzu.
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Its team of editors deliver specially priced deals on ebooks that span a range of categories. Early Bird Books is one of Open Road Integrated Media's six content brands. In total, Open Road Integrated Media’s content brands reach more than 1 million newsletter subscribers. In April of 2016, Early Bird Books newsletters had 375,000 subscribers. By May of 2016, Open Road Integrated Media was “increasingly focused on boosting such digital properties as its EarlyBirdBooks.com daily deals newsletter,” according to The Wall Street Journal. Over the course of 2016, Early Bird Books “generated the biggest growth in revenue” within Open Road Integrated Media. In April of 2017, Early Bird Books, together with its counterparts The Lineup and The Portalist, had 650,000 newsletter subscribers. In June of 2017, Open Road Integrated Media’s newsletters first reached one million collective subscribers, with Early Bird Books ’newsletter leading the way. The same month, Open Road Integrated Media launched three more content brands, growing to include a total of six content brands.
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Its team of editors create specially priced deals on ebooks that span a range of genres. In addition to its e-newsletter, Early Bird Books ’website provides readers with content focused on books, authors, and literary news, including author interviews, book excerpts, and thematic reading lists. Early Bird Books is one of Open Road Integrated Media's (OR / M) six content brands. Open Road Integrated Media’s content brands reach more than 1 million newsletter subscribers. Publishing Perspectives cited OR / M's e-newsletters as" the primary vehicles "driving marketing services like its Ignition program. Open Road was founded in 2009. In April of 2016, Early Bird Books' e-newsletter had 375,000 subscribers. In June of 2017, Open Road Integrated Media’s e-newsletters first reached one million collective subscribers, with Early Bird Books’ e-newsletter leading the way.
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The equity will decrease whenever the book value of the business decreases. This can also take place in many ways. For example, when machinery depreciates, the assets of the firm declined, which is registered in the liabilities side of the firm's balance sheet as a decrease in shareholder's equity.
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Equity will decrease, for example, when machinery depreciates, it is registered as a decline in the value of the asset, and on the liabilities side of the firm's balance sheet as a decrease in shareholder's equity.
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It is located at Balderas Avenue number 202, at the historic center of Mexico City. It is the goal of the museum to preserve and diffuse Diego Rivera's artistic work, as well as organizing temporary exhibits and conferences and events, talks, concerts and other art activities. In order to transport the mural from the hotel, the wall sustaining it was cutted; later, a metal structure was used to support its 15-ton weight, still preserved to date.
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It is located at Balderas Avenue number 202, in the historic center of Mexico City. It is the goal of the museum to preserve and disseminate Diego Rivera's artistic work, as well as organize temporary exhibits and conferences and events, talks, concerts and other art activities. The museum was built in 1986, with the goal of exhibiting Diego Rivera's mural Sueño de una tarde dominical en la Alameda Central (Dream of a Sunday Afternoon in the Alameda Central). It had previously been housed at the Hotel del Prado, which was severely damaged in the 1985 Mexico City earthquake. In order to transport the mural from the hotel, the wall that supported it was cut; later, a metal structure was used to support its 15-ton weight, still preserved to date.
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Because of the chord's symmetrical nature (superimposing more minor thirds on top of the the dim 7 produces no new pitches), there are only three different diminished seventh chords possible. Each of the diminished seventh chord's tones can be traced to its own hidden root. It is unclear to which key the chord belongs whenever it appears out of context or in an ambiguous one. The functional ambiguity of the diminished seventh chord makes it particularly useful in facilitating modulation, though overuse of this hermaphroditic chord can produce a feeble, bland sound. The most usual progression is the strong movement (or leap a fourth upward) with a tacit root ((V) -I).
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Because of the chord's symmetrical nature (superimposing more minor thirds on top of the dim 7 produces no new notes), there are only three different diminished seventh chords possible. The diminished seventh chord can appear in the first, second, or (least common) third inversion. Each inversion is enharmonic with another diminished seventh chord, and 19th-century composers in particular often make use of this enharmonic to use these chords for modulations.
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Maithils living on Indian side are officially called Bihari. Discrimination against Maithil community in India is not based on race, caste or color. The discrimination is entirely based on geography. One can clearly see the economic gap between Mithila region and other part of Bihar lying on South of Ganga river. In the race of development, Mithila region has not been considered. The government has no concrete plan to tackle flood problem of the region. This region is considered to the poorest region of India having a high rate of migration.
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Maithils in the Indian side are officially known as Bihari. Discrimination against the Maithil community in India is not based on race, caste or color but on geography. The economic gap between the Mithila region and the other area of Bihar south of the Ganges is apparent. The Mithila region is relatively undeveloped, and the government has no concrete plan to address the region's flood problems. It is considered one of India's poorest regions, with a high rate of migration.
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It is important to mention that in many instances, there was not a direct relationship between a carucate and the actual size of the land taxed. Therefore, the land extension of the Manor was much smaller than 240 acres. The Priory of St James was founded in 1146 by Baldwin de Redvers, the 1st Earl of Devon, a kinsman of the Dukes of Normandy. The Priory was a cell to the Cluniac monastery of St Martin-des-Champs near Paris.
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In many instances, there was not a direct relationship between a carucate and the actual size of the land taxed. Therefore, the land extension of the Manor was likely much smaller than 240 acres. The name appears in the Domesday Book, where it is recorded that the Viking of Whipton and the nobleman Roger Blunt were Lords of Heavitree in 1066 and 1086 respectively. In addition, it also stated that Ralph of Pomeroy was the Tenant-in-chief of the Lordship at the time of Roger Blunt. The priory was founded in 1146 by Baldwin de Redvers, the 1st Earl of Devon, a kinsman of the Dukes of Normandy. It was a cell to the Cluniac monastery of St Martin-des-Champs near Paris.
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Cavener would spend the next few years honing her artistic style through a series of apprenticeships and fellowships in Nashville, Tennessee and at the Charles H. Cecil Studios in Florence, Italy. Though she had been trained in the classical atelier style throughout her studies, this traditional way of sculpting that focused on the human form did not inspire her. Instead, Cavener discovered that the medium, clay, and the affordances it offered where her main source of inspiration. Cavener spent four years in Columbus, Ohio, developing her work and. She eventually entered graduate school at The Ohio State University, where she received her Master's in Fine Arts degree in ceramics between 2000 and 2002.
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Cavener would spend the next few years honing her artistic style and research through a series of apprenticeships and fellowships in Nashville, Tennessee and at the Charles H. Cecil Studios in Florence, Italy. Trained in the classical atelier style throughout her studies, Cavener became restless with the more traditional methods of sculpting and casting, focused exclusively on the human form. Returning to the raw material of clay, Cavener beggan developing a method of working solid on increasingly complex armatures that allowed her to explore more complex gestures. Cavener spent four years in Columbus, Ohio, independently developing her work and searching for a conceptual link to her interest human psychology and social structures. Cavener enrolled in graduate school at The Ohio State University, where she received her Master's in Fine Arts degree in ceramics between 2000 and 2002.
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Dhuey's work has appeared in a number of print and digital media platforms on discussions relating to the economics of education. Her research that indicated there were considerable advantages for older children in classroom environments is mentioned in pieces published in the Wall Street Journal, the Toronto Star and Slate that discuss academic redshirting. The 2008 novel 'by Malcolm Gladwell also features Dhuey’s work on this topic.
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Dhuey's work has contributed to discussions on the economics of education across a number of print and digital media publications. Dhuey's findings on the considerable advantages for older children in classroom environments, and the rise of academic redshirting, are mentioned in pieces published in the Wall Street Journal, the Toronto Star and Slate. The 2008 novel by Malcolm Gladwell also features her work on this topic.
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The locomotive was withdrawn from service in August 1962. Selected for preservation, it was restored at Doncaster Works, where the work was completed in April 1963. Almost ten years of storage then followed, during which it was moved several times.
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Withdrawn from British Railways service in August 1962, and selected for preservation within the national collection, it was restored at Doncaster Works. With work completed in April 1963, it was followed by almost ten years of storage, during which it was moved several times.
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Kadiri Baburao is an Indian Politician from Kanigiri constituency of Andhra Pradesh and is the current Member of the Legislative Assembly (India) (MLA) of the constituency. He has started his political career in TDP when he was young with the encouragement and support of his best pal Nandamuri Balakrishna. He was born in Seelamvaripalli village, Chandrasekhara puram mandal to Sri Kadiri Venkata Narasaiah and Lakshmamma.He has four brothers and two sisters, all of them are well settled in Hyderabad. He completed his schooling in Seelamavaripalli & C.S.Puram.He completed BA from Nizam college, Hyderabad in 1981.He has four daughters and one son. He primarily works for TDP party from the beginning. In 2004 elections he contested for MLA election from Darsi constituency and lost to Buchepalli Subba Reddy. In 2009 elections he got Kanigiri MLA seat from TDP but his nomination got rejected by Election commission. In 2014 assembly elections he won as Kanigiri MLA by defeating YSRCP candidate Madhusudhan Yadhav.
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Kadiri Baburao is an Indian politician of Andhra Pradesh and is the current Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA) for the Kanigiri constituency. He began his political career in the Telugu Desam Party (TDP) with the encouragement and support of Nandamuri Balakrishna. Baburau was born in Seelamvaripalli village, Chandrasekharapuram mandal, to Kadiri Venkata Narasaiah and Lakshmamma. He has four brothers and two sisters. He was educated in Seelamavaripalli and Chandrasekharapuram before earning a BA degree from Nizam college, Hyderabad in 1981. He has four daughters and one son. In the 2004 state assembly elections, Baburao contested the Darsi constituency as a candidate of the TDP and lost to Buchepalli Subba Reddy. He won the Kanigiri seat in the 2009 elections but his nomination was then rejected by the Election Commission of India. In the 2014 assembly elections, he was again elected from Kanigiri]] MLA, with his nearest rival being Madhusudhan Yadhav, a YSRCP candidate.
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He was consecrated a Bishop on August 15, 1954, and attended all the sessions of the Second Vatican Council between 1962 and 1965. John XXIII named Sales Apostolic Administrator of Natal, and on July 9, 1964 Pope Paul VI transferred him to the See of São Salvador da Bahia also as Apostolic Administrator. On October 29, 1968, Sales was appointed Metropolitan Archbishop of the Primatial See of São Salvador da Bahia. On April 28, 1969, Pope Paul created Archbishop Sales a Cardinal of the Holy Roman Church, assigning to him the title of Cardinal-Priest of S. Gregorio VII. On March 13, 1971, Pope Paul VI transferred Sales to the Metropolitan Archdiocese of São Sebastião do Rio de Janeiro, and in 1972 Sales received the additional responsibility of Ordinary to the Faithful of Oriental Rite in Brazil without their own Ordinary. Sales participated in the August and October 1978 conclaves.
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He was consecrated a Bishop on August 15, 1954. John XXIII named Sales Apostolic Administrator of Natal, and on July 9, 1964 Pope Paul VI transferred him to the Primatial See of São Salvador da Bahia also as Apostolic Administrator sede plena. Bishop Sales attended all the sessions of the Second Vatican Council between 1962 and 1965. On October 29, 1968, Sales, until then Apostolic Administrator, was appointed Metropolitan Archbishop São Salvador da Bahia, becoming ex officio the Primate of Brazil. On the consistory of 28 April 1969, Pope Paul created Archbishop Sales a Cardinal of the Holy Roman Church. On 30 April 1969 Cardinal Sales received his red birretta and the title of Cardinal-Priest of S. Gregorio VII. Cardinal Sales, then Metropolitan Archbishop of Salvador and Primate of Brazil was appointed papal legate to the Brazilian National Eucharistic Congress held in 1970 and in that capacity he presided over the said gathering, that took place in Brasília, the Nation's capital. On 13 March 1971, Pope Paul VI transferred Sales to the Metropolitan Archdiocese of São Sebastião do Rio de Janeiro. Cardinal Sales took posession of his new See on 27 March 1971. In 1972 Sales received the additional responsibility of Ordinary to the Faithful of Oriental Rite in Brazil without their own Ordinary. As a Cardinal-elector, Sales participated in the August and October 1978 conclaves.
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Therefore, rich biodiversity allows Pak Nai to become Site of Special Scientific Interest. Some species of crabs such as Perisesarma bidens and Ilyoplax tansuiensis are highlights of Ha Pak Nai. In addition, Ha Pak Nai used to be an oyster bed, thus, there is still remains of oyster shells all over the flat. Apart from the natural scenic spots, couples of relics can be found in Pak Nai. The most remarkable one is the fortified structure at No.55 Ha Pak Nai, which is a declared monument due to its connection with revolutionary movement under the leadership of Dr. Sun Yat-sen. In the mangrove in Ha Pak Nai live various species, which is highly conserved by environmentalists. Crabs, for example, Perisesarma bidens, Ilyoplax tansuiensis, Uca arcuata, and Sesarma sinensis are commonly found in the offshore mud flat. Among all crabs found in the Ha Pak Nai area, Horseshoe crab is one of the most highly conserved species. Horseshoe crabs originate from 450 million years ago; therefore, they are also called as "living fossils". Because of the copper in their blood, which can be extracted to be applied in detecting bacteria, Horseshoe crabs are highly valued in medical aspect.
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The mangroves in Ha Pak Nai harbor various species and are highly conserved by environmentalists. The rich biodiversity of this area has prompted the government to name it as a Site of Special Scientific Interest. Ha Pak Nai used to be an oyster bed, thus, there is still remains of oyster shells all over the flat. Some species of crabs such as Perisesarma bidens, Ilyoplax tansuiensis, Uca arcuata and Sesarma sinensis are commonly found in the offshore mud flat. Among all crabs found in the Ha Pak Nai areathe, Horseshoe crab is one of the most highly conserved species. Horseshoe crabs originate from 450 million years ago, and thus are called "living fossils." Because of the copper in their blood, which can be extracted to be applied in detecting bacteria, Horseshoe crabs are highly valued in medinect.
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This Tradition was skipped in 2020 due to the COVID-19 Pandemic. For this event, the brothers of Beta Theta Pi shovel approximately 14 tons of sand into the fraternity house basement, and install a boardwalk and a lifeguard station that doubles as a DJ booth. During Spring Term, Lawrence University hosts a music festival, LU-aroo (a play on words on the popular music festival Bonnaroo).
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For this event, the brothers of ΒθΠ shovel approximately 14 tons of sand into the fraternity house basement, and install a boardwalk and a lifeguard station that doubles as a DJ booth.This tradition was skipped in 2020, due to the COVID-19 pandemic. During spring term, Lawrence hosts a music festival, LU-aroo (a play on words on the popular music festival Bonnaroo).
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Events have neither duration in time nor extent in space. The tokens typically used in popular expositions of relativity to represent events—sparks, firecrackers, lightning bolts and the like—are not events because they have finite durations and extents. Unlike the analogies used to explain events, mathematical events, since they have no duration, have no speed and cannot be in motion. On the other hand, the path of a particle through spacetime can be considered to be a succession of events.
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The word "event" used in relativity should not be confused with the use of the word "event" in normal conversation, where it might refer to an "event" as something such as a concert, sporting event, or a battle. These are not mathematical "events" in the way the word is used in relativity because they have finite durations and extents. Unlike the analogies used to explain events, such as firecrackers or lightning bolts, mathematical events have zero duration and represent a single point in space. The path of a particle through spacetime can be considered to be a succession of events.
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Created by William Shatner and co-authors Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens. No official name has been given to the series by Shatner, the Reeves-Stevenses, or Pocket Books. The series has been been given the colloquial name "The Shatnerverse" by fans. The novels have been retroactively organized into three trilogies by fans. Characters from other films and television series appear in each of the novels. However, the continuity of the series is independent of other series and book lines. The Odyssey trilogy details the exploits of James Kirk after his resurrection by agents of the Romulan Star Empire after the conclusion of Star Trek Generations. Shatner outlined the concept for the series while filming Kirk's death scenes in 1994.
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Created by William Shatner, and co-written by Judith and Garfield Reeves-Stevens, the concept series explores events following James Kirk's resurrection by agents of the Romulan Star Empire after the character's death in Star Trek Generations. Shatner outlined the concept for the series while filming Kirk's final scenes in 1994. The series is organized into three narratively linked trilogies. No official name has been given to the series by Shatner, the Reeves-Stevenses, or by Pocket Books, however the colloquial name "The Shatnerverse" has been adopted by Memory Alpha and others. Characters from other films and television series appear in the novels. However, the continuity within the series does not align with other book lines. The trilogy follows the events of Star Trek Generations.
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Bane abducts a child for an undisclosed ransom but it is rescued by Batman. Lady Shiva approaches Batman to inform him of an intruder using the Lazarus Pit and requests him in identifying who it was. Catwoman steals the ransom with Batman following her. During the pursuit, Batman's grapple is shot by a masked vigilante in the distance, leading to his fall and skull cracked, but is recovered by Batgirl. Catwoman delivers the ransom to Poison Ivy, who has been controlling her with a hypnotic kiss.
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After Batman rescues an abducted child from Bane for a ransom, Lady Shiva approaches Batman to inform him of a Lazarus Pit intruder and requests him in identifying who it was. Batman agrees to do so while Catwoman steals the ransom with Batman following her. During the pursuit, Batman's grapple is shot by a masked vigilante in the distance, leading to his fall and skull cracked. He is recovered by Batgirl, who takes him back to the Batcave where Bruce’s butler Alfred Pennyworth contacts his childhood friend now renowned brain surgeon-Tommy Elliot to treat his skull. Alfred then gives him a new bulletproof batsuit. Meanwhile, Catwoman delivers the ransom to Poison Ivy, who has been controlling her with a hypnotic kiss.
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Giuliana Setari Carusi (Pescara), Italy, currently lives in Paris, France, after having lived many years in New York, United States. Giuliana Setari Carusi approaches the contemporary art world with the role of collector, next to her husband Thomas, they have, for thirty years a collection of contemporary art internationally recognized. Since 2001 she is president founder of the nonprofit Dena Foundation for Contemporary Art.
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Giuliana Setari Carusi (Pescara) is an Italian art collector. She currently lives in Paris, after many years in New York. Giuliana Setari Carusi and her husband Tommaso have founded thirty years ago a collection of contemporary art that is well-known internationally. Since 2001 she is founding president of the non-profit "Dena Foundation for Contemporary Art".
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As the number of visual objects increases, the information available for each object will decrease due to less cognitive processing, hence task relevant objects must bias the competition. Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) has shown that attention effects at a neuron level can be explained using ‘’ bias competition theory ’’. The attention can be said to bias the internal weight toward the attended object and is shown by an increase in oxygenated blood to that neuron. Further support comes from neurophysiological studies which suggest that attention results from top-down biasing which has been shown to influence neuron spiking. Top-down attention is affected by external inputs which bias neurons.
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As the number of visual objects increases, the information available for each object will decrease due to increased neural workload and decreased cognitive process capacity. This suggests that for an object in the visual field to be cognitively processed there needs to be a way to bias the cognitive resources towards the object. Attention prioritises task relevent objects biasing this process. Functional magnetic resonance imaging (fMRI) has shown that bias competition theory can explain the observed attention effects at a neronal level. Attention effects bias the internal weight (strengthens connections) of task relevent features toward the attended object. This is shown by an increase in oxygenated blood to that neuron. Further neurological support comes from neurophysiological studies which have shown that attention results from top-down biasing which in turn influences neuron spiking. In sum, top-down guidance of attention is affected by external inputs which bias neurons in the brain.
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The situation is analogous to that of some English words that sound the same, such as "meet" and "meat". These two words were pronounced and respectively during the time of Chaucer, as evident by spelling. Today they sound the same, but are distinguished by spelling.
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Lipids are usually made up of a molecule of glycerol and other molecules. In triglycerides, or the main lipid, there is one molecule of glycerol, and three fatty acids. Fatty acids are considered the monomer in that case, and could be saturated (no double bonds in the carbon chain) or unsaturated (one or more double bond in the carbon chain). Lipids, especially phospholipids, are also used in different pharmaceutical products, either as co-solubilisers e.g. in Parenteral infusions or else as drug carrier components (e.g. in a Liposome or Transfersome). Proteins are macro biopolymers, and have monomers of amino acids. There are 20 standard amino acids, and they contain a carboxyl group, an amino group, and a side chain (or an "R" group). The "R" group is what makes each amino acid different, and the properties of the side chains greatly influence the overall three-dimensional confirmation of a protein. When Amino acids combine, they form a special bond called a peptide bond through dehydration synthesis, and become a polypeptide, or a protein. Nucleic acids are very important in biochemistry, as they are what make up DNA, something all cellular organism use to store their genetic information.
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Lipids are usually made from one molecule of glycerol combined with other molecules. In triglycerides, the main group of bulk lipids, there is one molecule of glycerol and three fatty acids. Fatty acids are considered the monomer in that case, and may be saturated (no double bonds in the carbon chain) or unsaturated (one or more double bonds in the carbon chain). Lipids, especially phospholipids, are also used in various pharmaceutical products, either as co-solubilizers (e.g. in parenteral infusions) or else as drug carrier components (e.g. in a liposome or transfer some). Nucleic acids are the molecules that makeup DNA, an extremely important substance that all cellular organisms use to store their genetic information.
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Brown's Station, New York was a village located in the Esopus Valley in southeastern Ulster County, New York. It was the easternmost village in the town of Olive, New York, and was named after Alfred Brown, who owned and tended to the Brown Farm House that was in the village. In the village, there were farms, boarding houses, stores, and even a telegraph office. It was a popular tourist spot. Plenty of people would come from many different areas, especially New York City, to take time off and relax. There were two streams that went through the town; the Esopus Creek and the Beaverkill Creek, which flowed into the Esopus at the end of the village. Tourists and summer / weekend boarders would come to this town to swim in the creeks, along with other activities such as tubing, boating and fishing. The town was served by the Ulster and Delaware Railroad, which had a railroad depot in the town. The depot was also called Brown's Station, and was one of the busiest depots in the Esopus Valley. It was where several carloads of cement were dropped off for the construction of the Ashokan Reservoir. The City of New York had been surveying many places to put a reservoir. They had already impounded part of the Croton River and most of its subsidaries. But they needed more water, and they eventually decided to flood the Esopus Valley. They started building the dam in 1906, and were using Rosendale Cement, the strongest at the time. The cement was dropped off at Brown's Station. When they finished in 1912, they started flooding the valley, and the buildings were either moved or abandoned. The reservoir was completely filled in 1915, and Brown's Station was but a memory.
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Brown's Station, New York, is a village that no longer exists. It was located in the Esopus Valley of southeastern Ulster County, New York (USA), and it was submerged by the waters of the Ashokan Reservoir, an artificial lake built between 1906 and 1915 to supply fresh water to New York City. The easternmost village in the town of Olive, New York, Brown's Station was named for Alfred Brown, a prominent local farmer. In the village and its environs, there were farms, boarding houses, shops, and a telegraph office. Two streams flowed through the village: the Esopus Creek and the Beaverkill Creek, which merged, at the downhill end of the village, retaining the name, Esopus Creek. Brown's Station was a popular spot, especially for vacationers from New York City, who would come to swim in the creeks, and to enjoy rafting (using rubber inner tubes), boating, and fishing. The village was served by the Ulster and Delaware Railroad; the railroad depot called Brown's Station, which lent the village its name, was one of the busiest passenger and freight depots in the Esopus Valley. Ironically, the depot at Brown's Station was an instrument of its own demise; shipments of cement were transported there for use in the construction of the Ashokan Reservoir. Having already impounded part of the nearby Croton River and most of its tributaries, agents of the City of New York surveyed a number of places to build another reservoir. Eventually, they decided to flood the Esopus Valley. They started building the dam in 1906, using Rosendale cement, a high-quality hydraulic cement produced at Rosendale in the northeastern part of Ulster County. When the dam was completed in 1912, the sluice was closed and water backed up to flood the valley, a process which was completed in 1915. The buildings of Brown's Station had either been moved or abandoned.
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Some may argue that they are the hardest working ships in the Navy. The oceanographic survey ships have no homeport; they are forward-deployed surveying the ocean 365 days every year. Because the ships are always conducting operations, oceanographers from NAVOCEANO fly to locations around the world to meet the ship and relieve their fellow surveyors, so the operations are not interrupted.
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Perhaps the hardest working ships in the Navy, the oceanographic survey ships have no homeport and are forward-deployed, surveying the ocean 365 days every year. To avoid interrupting continuous operations, oceanographers from NAVOCEANO relieve their fellow surveyors by flying to locations around the world to meet the ship.
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Hamula has served as a bishop, elders quorum president, stake Sunday School president and member of a high council. He also was of the Mesa Arizona Red Mountain Stake, as well as the Mesa Arizona Salt River Stake. Latter he served as a stake young men president. In fact Hamula was the first president of the Mesa Arizona Red Mountain Stake when it was organized in 1992. From 2000-2008 Hamula served as an Area Authority Seventy.
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In the LDS Church, Hamula has served as a bishop, elders quorum president, stake Sunday School president, a member of a stake high council, and a stake Young Men president. He was also the president of the Mesa Arizona Salt River Stake and the first president of the Mesa Arizona Red Mountain Stake when it was organized in 1992. From 2000 to 2008, Hamula was an area authority. He became a member of the church's First Quorum of the Seventy at the church's April 2008 general conference in Salt Lake City, Utah.
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Satya Pal Singh Baghel (born 21 June 1960) is an Indian politician. He was elected to the Lok Sabha for the Samajwadi Party thrice, and once to the Rajya Sabha. In 2019, Baghel was elected to Lok Sabha from Agra as a member of the BJP. On July 7, 2021 he was sworn in as the Minister of State (MoS) for Law and Justice in the second expansion of the Union Cabinet of Modi Led Central Government.
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Satya Pal Singh Baghel (born 21 June 1960) is an Indian politician and current Minister of State in the Ministry of Law and Justice in the Second Modi Ministry. A member of the Bharatiya Janata Party, he got elected to the 17th Lok Sabha from Agra. He previously was a member of the Samajwadi Party, in which he got elected to Lok Sabha thrice and to Rajya Sabha once.
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An electric field (sometimes E-field) surrounds an electric charge, and exerts force on other charges in the field, attracting or repelling them. Electric fields are created by electric charges, or by time-varying magnetic fields. Electric fields and magnetic fields are both manifestations of the electromagnetic force, one of the four fundamental forces (or interactions) of nature.
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An electric field (sometimes E-field, often denoted E) is created by an electrically charged body in the space that surrounds it and results in a force exerted on any other charges placed within the field, either attracting or repelling them. Like magnetic fields, electric fields are a manifestation of the electromagnetic force, one of the four fundamental interactions of nature. Electric fields can be created by both static electric charges and by time-varying magnetic fields, as the two fields are coupled through Maxwell's equations.
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| 2013 || $ 12.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.9m || $ 1.8m || By comparison, 2013 annual reported revenues were 62m Euros for Ireland, 61m GBP for Wales and 39m GBP for Scotland. | 2012 || $ 10.2m || $ 4.3m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.6m || $ 1.1m || By comparison, annual reported revenue for the 2012-13 year were 61m GBP for Wales, 54m GBP for New Zealand, and 39m GBP for Scotland. | 2011 || $ 7.5m || $ 3.2m || $ 1.7m || $ 1.5m || $ 0.2m || By comparison, annual reported revenue for 2011 were C $ 8.9m for Canada, and 38m GBP for Scotland for the 2011-12 year. | 2010 || $ 6.4m || $ 2.8m || $ 1.4m || $ 1.0m || $ 0.2m || USA Rugby's revenue dropped in 2010 due to the loss of a major sponsor. Note: Grants come mainly from the International Rugby Board and from the United States Olympic Committee.
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